This is a book review by the critic Mr. Hei Belly. His writing is better than many book writers. Because he mentioned me in the book review, I couldn't help but boast about it. Friends who always visit the forum know that Brother Hei's book review is a golden signboard, and many great gods can't ask for it. So I feel very honored to give it to everyone for their wonderful writings.

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I started planning to write this series of short comments a long time ago. The original intention of writing was to have some "compensation" psychology. I have always been biased towards the works of girls on the Internet, and I always feel that they pursue vague emotions in their works, focus too much on the description of subtleties, and even admire themselves too much in fancy and empty words. However, after a friend recommended me to read several works carefully, I changed my view.

What is particularly commendable is that when more and more bearded men, for the sake of the VIP income, even imitate the so-called "beautiful writers" of the past and write with their bodies. Oh, to be precise, the second half of the shen is writing, there are some girls here who are using words to weave their dreams. We might as well take off our tinted glasses and enter these pure and pure hearts.

Qin: One song is full of thoughts, two songs are broken, three songs finally have the sadness and tears, and new makeup is made up with tears. - "Love for You" (author: Mu Ziyongqun)

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Love for you and give me sincere;

Please treasure this love;

Then a hundred years will last your life;

Use that true love as a testimony

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"Love for You" is a song composed for a small person. The protagonist Shi Hui, an ordinary young woman, uses her body full of pain to slowly pluck the strings of family, work, and feelings. In it, we can hear the longing of an ordinary young woman, calmly, helplessly, escape and struggle. However, listening quietly, there is clearly a sonorous sound there, because it is a heart that a female special police officer will never be dim.

She once had a heartbreaking love experience in the green military camp, which was sealed in her heart. The superficial concealment, coupled with the experience of life and death, allowed the protagonist to face the ordinary life of ordinary people calmly. However, the so-called calmness and calmness, and unscathing are actually just this ordinary woman who takes out her soul and puts it in the sky, stays with her former lover, and circles quietly not far away, while watching the coming and goings and herself drifting with the crowd.

Of course, life will not give any favor to otherworldly people. All kinds of men are chasing and dealing with each other, the right and wrong contradictions of colleagues in the unit, the bonds of family affection, and the whirlpool of friendship, everything comes one after another. The protagonist is escaping and persevering in her own way, firmly holding on to the peace in her heart, and she carefully dodging.

Perhaps, it was the olive green that she had worn, or perhaps it was the natural persistence and justice of her bones. This woman clearly had something that we looked up to. When facing the idle and trivialities that every ordinary person experienced, she always stood by alone and felt at ease. However, when she met the whirlpool of mud and sand that every ordinary person could avoid, a force and chivalrous burst out of this petite body.

There are no bold words or pretending to behave. Everything seems to happen quietly to every reader, with smiles visible and sighs heard. In addition to the real creation of the heroine, there are many small characters in the book. The true feelings of the little characters are expressed, which often makes Lao Hei, a man who has been standing for the past year, and the sadness of the few young sisters after the instructor's accident, and the silent confrontation of the former comrades; the mother and daughter support each other and deceiving each other with kindness; after Shi Hui was injured, the brothers and sisters' unreserved enthusiasm; the words that the mother left to Shi Hui, the words that only mother would say in the world; and the young man who was young and jumped away in the past, what he finally sealed in Shi Hui's memory...

Life is carrying everyone forward. Each of us is also surrendering, compromising, and fighting. However, I believe that everyone also has a love that they stick to. As Beimura said: "We probably don't know how to live. Look, life has been made like this by us, and there must be comforters to comfort my life."

Have you found your comforter?

Note: This book will be published and distributed by Zhigongchang, which has successfully planned and published excellent military works such as "Wolf Tooth", "The Last Bullet to You", and "Lifetime-Making Career".

Chess: The real and the virtual are the wonders of right and strange. - "The Exorcist" (author: Liu An Huaming)

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Life is like a chess game, it is just a game. But what if you encounter one after another, a brutal, a scammer, a dangerous, or a dead end?

While writing this comment, I opened "The Exorcist" again. On the middle of summer, I felt the back of my neck was cold. The MM who could write such gloomy words was extraordinary (the sister of the Bull Demon King! Haha, for a MM writer who was smart and smart, this extraordinary naturally refers to the thought and courage). However, it seems not surprising to think about it. Perhaps only MM can brew such ghost aura bit by bit at the fingertips so delicately.

Just like playing chess, the overall framework of this book "Exorcist" grasps the balance between reality and reality. Dragging ghost stories into the mundane world can undoubtedly inspire readers' sense of substitution to the greatest extent. Otherwise, no matter how powerful the demon king ghost is, he will probably be like Gao Laozhuang's descending to the earth. There is only a little stupidity in front of the masters, but the rest of the taste is gone. I think that the biggest highlight of this book is the atmosphere rendering under ordinary scenes. Nightmare, ancient houses, hospitals, warehouses... those worldly grudges and hostility unconsciously bring you into broad daylight, and after dinner, you are surrounded by dark and gloomy ghost energy.

Looking at ghost stories, in addition to the atmosphere, grudges, love and hatred between people and ghosts is also essential. Otherwise, what is the difference between passing computer games? The heroine of this book, Yue Xiaoxia, is an ordinary woman with weak yang energy but stubborn and curiousness, unexpectedly gets involved in strange and terrifying ghost events again and again. Fortunately, she met him, a man who is gifted and supernatural, but has always sealed himself. Two people, one is a slut and the other escapes, seemingly always stubborn, but feels so tacit.

The author's unique female thinking still controls the development of the emotional drama of the two people from time to time. A few paragraphs of teasing warmth are interspersed in the breathtaking fear from time to time, just like a cup of coffee in a winter night, which is even more precious. In the handling of this emotional drama, the author fully utilizes the expertise of women and grasps the emotional changes of the male and female protagonists in detail, like spring rain moistening things, like sprouting branches. How to make two seemingly ruthless people slowly develop love? I think this is also a major highlight of this book.

If you are not satisfied with it, it should be that you lack the necessary suspense and reasoning while being thrilled. The first story ended too quickly, just like a chess in the middle game. You could have made more aftertaste, but you entered the final stage early, which is a pity. The second story is revealed at the beginning, with no suspense, and the rest is just a process of fighting the boss. What is the most terrifying and attractive? Unknown! Just like a chess game, only if the situation is unclear can it be more valuable to be paid attention to.

Everything is just a chess game, what about us? Are we entering the game?

Book: The God of Beautiful God, Shenshen of the Bone.--"Zhucheng" (author: Mu Ziyongqun)

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Reading "Cancheng", it is like seeing a very elegant woman writing a small calligraphy article of Zhong Wang with a clean and elegant style, but the lines are slightly softer.

The novel begins with the protagonist Fang Zixuan entering Shacheng with her father. This opening is straightforward and plain, but it becomes an alternative among the many works that are willing to attract attention and break the sky and earth and run around in time and space.

With the author's delicate brushstrokes, Fang Zixuan's teaching career at Shacheng No. 1 Middle School slowly kicked off. It was just a little trivial matters during class breaks, a little entanglement between teachers and students, and many feelings were slowly pulled out of the small campus of the small town. Just when I sighed that the author was as slow as writing regular script, the novel lays the groundwork without expressing his feelings with the memories of the school guardian, and then wisps of the heroine's life story were revealed. This layout surprised me at the author's heart like a professional writer.

If I hadn't learned a few other works of the author, I would have been almost certain that Mu Ziyongqun was a professional teacher. I could not imagine that she could so clearly grasp the experienced and calmness of the old teachers on campus, the young teachers' strength and youth, the students' rebellion and compliance, the education system, school rules and personal feelings. As I read, it seemed as if I was in the middle school campus that had been away for more than ten years, listening to the ringtones of class and after class, looking at the students playing on campus, and even smelling the little bit of choking chalk dust.

While truly reproducing campus life, the delicate expression of the true emotions of each character in the book has also become another highlight of this book. In fact, it is not just the heroine, but many characters in the book are vividly displayed on the paper. Taking Chu Liang, a Chinese teacher at No. 1 Middle School, who has a leading role in the teaching path, as an example, he is very similar to my physics teacher in high school. Among students, he is almost as trustworthy as a god, but he is not well-versed in the eyes of the leaders. Those who resent him only want to drive him away, and those who love him want to express a heart to offer him. But he is really here.

Isn't the world sophisticated and smooth, or is it too stupid and dull? In fact, I think he should be the kind of sincere person. He is sincere about his teachers, friends and students, and he is disdainful of those vain and impolite activities. Of course, his sincere efforts have also been rewarded sincerely. On a winter night, his mentor waited for the rabbit, wrapped in a quilt and waited hard in the student dormitory to leave; and Chu Liang's favorite student Ding Jiale vented the unique teenager after he learned that Chu Liang had transferred to school. In this way, all his feelings were sighing.

Although I don’t know the real life background of the author Mu Ziyongqun, no doubt only those who have experienced life can create such a real feeling and a few characters. All the joys and sorrows are quietly staged in this small town. There are no neon lights here, only candlelights here.

Postscript: Such topics and writing may be doomed to be difficult to please in the current online reading environment. Just like our mouthpieces that are washed by tobacco, alcohol and dust all day long can only stimulate them with spicy hot pot. I wonder if we can taste the fragrance of a plate of vegetarian side dishes?

Painting: Flower-like feelings, painting-like words. - "Goodbye, I Love You" (author: Xun Yeyu)

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After completing the first three short reviews, I searched for a long time before I discovered this novel. Coincidentally, this book just fits the word "painted":

First, this is a comic fan, the original work is the Japanese comic "The Myth of the Constellation Palace"; second, the protagonist of this book, Na Luo, is a female painter in the real world in the book; third, if the first two points are just coincidentals, then the feelings given to me by the text of this book are just like a scroll slowly unfolding. At the beginning, when Na Luo met the field, he used such words: "The boy still didn't speak. But, smile, yes, smile passed through his handsome face like a breeze. In this moment, it seemed like a thousand hyacinths blooming on the hillside, and the whole world was full of spring." This passage was like this smile, so bright and so clear that it touched me instantly.

A mysterious pattern on his arm opened the door to the Greek gods' world in front of the protagonist, and she herself was actually an amnesia goddess. Whether it was the young painter before or the amnesia goddess afterwards, every movement and every expression was carefully crafted by the author in extremely exquisite words.

What complements the words is the girlish feelings that are constantly jumping in the words. Unlike any previous goddess, this protagonist brings the innocent and naughty of many girls, and of course, there is also the kindness that seems to be forever excess. And under the guidance of this girl's eyes, we little by little know that the mysterious and distant world of gods also has love and hatred that is the same as us.

Compared to the attractiveness at the beginning of this novel, the part behind me is somewhat difficult. It is not that the author's writing skills are declining or my understanding is declining, but that while the huge scroll is unfolding, the author is still too focused on the subtleties. When I play with the Shoushan stone sculptures of more than an inch in size in my hand, I will carefully appreciate its patterns, its knife skills, its treasure light, etc., but when I face a mountain, can I still appreciate it like this? In the early stage of the work, delicate words are used to introduce the story background from the small parts and carefully describe the protagonist's personality. However, in the later stage, the huge world of gods is slowly displayed, if the readers are still exploring inch by inch, it is undoubtedly a difficult task for readers, because they only see too many parts, but lose a complete story.
Chapter completed!