038 Busy parents and children by the side
Bai Jingjing also caught a cold. Seeing Sun Wu's red nose, she poured the prepared cold medicine from her palm into his palm, and said in a hoarse voice: "Let's not be so ridiculous next time."
Last night, both she and Sun Wu had a long drought and a sweet rain, so they lost control.
Sun Wu nodded, and he didn't expect that he and Bai Jingjing would catch a cold, obviously he didn't feel the cold at that time.
Looking back now, it’s still a knife on the word “Se”!
They both caught a cold, and whether they were in good health, they could not contagious their daughter.
That's exactly what the saying goes: the family must be neatly organized.
So Sun Xiaochan put on a children's mask.
The little guy did not show resistance, but instead found it very fun. He deliberately covered his nose with a mask and said to Bai Jingjing's urn: "Mom, I can't breathe anymore."
After being glared at Bai Jingjing with a majestic glare, she immediately pulled off her mask and said with a smile: "I can breathe again."
Although Bai Jingjing had adapted to her daughter's naughtyness, she still complained to Sun Wu: "This girl was not so bold before, and it's not your habit."
Although she complained, she also had a happy expression on her face.
In the past, Bai Jingjing was worried that her daughter would be too peaceful and would play quietly alone every day.
Sun Wu cast a gentle look at Sun Xiaochan and said with a smile: "It's better to be more lively, a child."
Bai Jingjing nodded slightly, and as she got up and hid the box of children's masks that Sun Wu bought into a place that Sun Xiaochan could not reach, she said, "By the way, your contract was taken away by the courier in the morning."
Last night, because Sun Wu placed an order a little late, although the system showed that the courier came to receive the order within an hour, the other party did not come, but just called to pick up the order tomorrow.
"Then we'll just wait for the state." Sun Wu said happily.
Bai Jingjing nodded, saw the pride on Sun Wu's face, and couldn't help but remind him: "But, don't relax, the current plot is the key."
The plot of "Ghost Hunter" comes to Agui from Weishi to Guangming City, becoming a member of Guangming City's honorary law enforcement team, with a higher status than ordinary citizens.
"Have you seen it?" Sun Wu asked curiously.
Faced with the problem of being mentally retarded, Bai Jingjing was too lazy to roll her eyes. "Of course I have to watch it. If there is a problem with your plot control, I'll remind you in time."
As the saying goes, "Three cobblers are better than Zhuge Liang."
This principle is easy to understand, and Sun Wu naturally knew it, so he said, "I'll take a look at it for you, too."
He is a systematic person, and his proficiency in [expression] has inexplicably reached 37, and he can describe the pictures in his mind more satisfactorily through words.
Moreover, his proficiency in [imagination] has reached 20. For comics, which require the creation of images in your mind, it is undoubtedly a very useful tool.
Bai Jingjing didn't mean to hide it. After saying the name of her comic, she took the initiative to say, "You've finished reading it, give me some advice."
"Yes." Sun Wu nodded and agreed, took out his mobile phone and downloaded the website APP where Bai Jingjing signed the contract, searched for the name of her comics, and read it carefully from a chapter.
Bai Jingjing's comics are classic romance comics wearing fairy tale skins, with beautiful protagonists and handsome supporting characters.
After reading a few pictures, Sun Wu frowned. In his personal sense, this is a beautifully painted work. Just like some light novels in the East Island Country, there is nothing except the beautiful illustrations.
The plot is quite vulgar. Everyone who is a man likes the heroine, and all who is a woman are jealous of the heroine. They are all white lotus attributes, which rely entirely on misunderstandings to promote the development of the plot.
Bai Jingjing felt a little disappointed when she saw Sun Wu's tight brows and thought to herself: "It's true."
Although she felt that the plot design of "Ghost Hunter" was not very good and was entirely based on the setting to win, she also knew that Sun Wu did better than herself in this regard.
After Sun Wu finished looking up at him, Bai Jingjing immediately asked, "What are the areas that need to be corrected?"
"First, the plot is too dull and there are no ups and downs."
"Second, the conflict is not obvious. There should be fundamental conflicts of interest in the Demon Realm, the Immortal Realm and the Human Realm, rather than the protagonist and his group of people who are traveling around."
"Third, the characters are portrayed too single. The princes on earth are sinister and cunning. The gods in the sky are all hypocritical. Where is the demon world? They are all silly and sweet. However, the new Monkey King Sun Wukong portrays them very perfectly. They dare to love and hate, and justice and courage are hidden in their hearts. They are manifested by reckless actions."
Speaking of this, Sun Wu paused for a moment, looked at Bai Jingjing's eyes and said, "You should observe more people around you, such as Li Xueer. She is a good second-television template. She has the disadvantage of being clever, but she is kind-hearted and knows how to cater to others."
"Is that true?" Bai Jingjing asked with a smile.
Seeing Bai Jingjing's kind smile on her face, Sun Wu hurriedly explained: "I'm just giving an example."
Then he said, "Chen Junsheng is also an excellent villain, with one thing in front of him and another behind him. When he was in college, he obviously wanted to be the class monitor, but he deliberately said that he was not capable enough. As a result, when I became him, he said he deliberately let me go. What a pity is that he knew you were my girlfriend, and he often showed kindness to you."
Sun Wu gritted his teeth and said the last sentence.
When Bai Jingjing heard the name "Chen Junsheng" again, she couldn't help but shake her head and sighed: "That guy is just a self-righteous villain, don't mention him."
Then he showed a thoughtful expression and said slowly: "It is indeed a good idea to use the people around him as the prototype. Just like when I was painting a monkey, when I thought of you, I naturally know what he should do and what he should say."
"That's the reason." Sun Wu laughed.
Although he has only written a novel seriously recently, he has observed his classmates a lot in middle school, observing them from the perspective of an onlooker. When he conceived the characters, he naturally had a blurred figure. The rest only needs to slowly draw his nose, eyes and mouth.
Seeing Bai Jingjing take out the notes, he said again: "But now you can only make mistakes. When I restarted the next movie, I also found a lot of dissatisfaction with "Ghost Hunter". But when I thought that this was a serialized online article, I had to put these shortcomings there and think about writing the next one."
"I know, it's not the first day I entered the industry." Bai Jingjing said with a smile.
Thinking that she was underestimated by Sun Wu, she picked up the pen and tapped him in the head with her pen cap. She said angrily: "You, a newcomer who has just entered the industry, actually taught me that the old senior is here. It's really rude."
"Is that true? Senior Xiaobai." Sun Wu tilted his head and looked at Bai Jingjing with narrow eyes.
"Of course that's the case." Bai Jingjing raised her chin and turned her head to the other side.
Since she was wearing a ponytail today, the tip of her hair swept across Sun Wu's face, like a spring breeze blowing by, he couldn't help but take a deep breath and said intoxicatedly: "It's so fragrant!"
Bai Jingjing blushed and she whispered: "It's still early, why are you anxious? My daughter hasn't even......"
"Mom, we haven't gone downstairs to play today." Sun Xiaochan interrupted Bai Jingjing's words, pursed her mouth, and looked at her mother timidly.
She felt that she was back in the past and that her father didn't take her to skateboard.
Seeing his daughter's aggrieved expression, Bai Jingjing and Sun Wu looked at each other at the same time, showing a helpless look.
"I forgot the most important thing."
"yes!"
This time the two of them had the idea on the same channel.
Busy parents will always forget their children in the corner unconsciously, and some parents will always forget them, but they obviously won’t do this.
Chapter completed!