The latest two chapters have been deleted, but I didn’t want to delete them.

I think that there is no mistake in the plot, but it is nothing more than not writing it well. The scene switches too fast, so the reading feel created is very poor. I plan to refine it now.

So I will make this single chapter on purpose just to complain about it myself, and I have no other intentions.

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First of all, the first question is [no internal flavor after going down the mountain]

I was a little confused when I was on the mountain.

There are a lot of comments, and I am doing the doll again? The eldest brother is finished, the second brother is finished, the second brother is finished, the third brother is finished, the third brother is finished, the fourth brother is finished, the first ten chapters are very good, but the later part is constantly blocked dolls, which is so disgusting to me.

Please, it is enough to write a senior brother, second brother, senior sister. Don’t repeat it anymore, it’s really obvious that you’re vomiting.

When I was writing, I saw a lot of comments like this, and after thinking about it, I wrote down the plot of [Qingzhou Swordsman] a little in advance. In fact, I originally planned to go to the Qingzhou Swordsman Conference after the third senior brother appeared.

Now I run out and say it’s no internal flavor, I want to see the protagonist shocking his senior brother in the sect.

I understand this mentality. It feels very refreshing and delicious when eating vegetables at the beginning! After eating for seven days, I vomited and suddenly changed to a plate of radishes. Although I don’t necessarily like eating radishes, I can still accept radishes compared to vegetables.

But I ate too much radish and missed the vegetables again immediately.

But can you stop posting some comments like this?

It was hard to adjust everyone, and I even saw two groups of readers in the book review area criticizing each other. Who should I help? Ask yourself? Two book friends with different opinions started arguing, who should I help? Or, who should I stand by?

Writing a book is like going to a restaurant for dinner. Every once in a while, there will be a plate of different dishes interspersed with the same dishes occasionally. Some dishes are delicious, while others may not be as good as the taste, which is normal.

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The second question [Su Changyu has too many scenes]

Su Changyu does have many scenes.

Maybe his identity is very special and he is an important role I set.

It can be said that Su Changyu played an extremely important role in the first one million words, so he couldn't help but write more of his story, and a part of it will be slightly deleted later.

But there is another point.

Online novels often cost two or three million words, three or four million words.

This is another funny immortal cultivation article. Some people always use this book to compare with traditional immortal cultivation articles.

Since it is a funny article, what is the most important thing?

Characters and plot are the most important.

How do you get the character design?

Can you write out a character in just one sentence?

I don't have the ability to do it, so I don't expect this book to be a super popular hit.

If you want to write a character with flesh and blood, personality, and can appear in your mind in three-dimensional way, you can only describe it in words.

Then you can't save trouble.

Su Changyu's personality is that he likes to pretend to be sucked, and he can't eat even food, but he can't pretend to be sucked.

There are two main reasons for pretending to be awkward. One is that it is insufficient preparation, which leads to the abrupt entry. The second is that it has not been fully recognized. This book is a funny immortal cultivation article.

It's a bit stingy, too.

In some Japanese comics, the protagonist pretends to be awkward, but he is obviously not strong enough, so he stands in front of the boss and forcefully passionately, "I want to protect this world", and then comes with background music.

In a moment.

Audience: "66666666"

Audience: "It's so passionate, I'm crying! Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Audience: "Look at the domestic ones, look at them, this is flesh and blood, whisper, I cry!"

Is it okay to not have double standards?

Besides, I am not passionate, just a funny and bizarre plot, coupled with a certain rationality, creates a sense of contrast.

result......

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The third question [Update question]

This book has 220,000 words!

I don't mean anything else, you can take a look at the books that will be available on September 1st.

You can read the new book monthly ticket list.

Most public chapters are basically listed on the shelves of 20 to 230.

Some are even more ruthless, and they are on the shelves at 180,000 or 90,000 words.

This book will be twenty-two days away from being released on October 1st.

It is updated according to the 6,000 words a day, and there are still 130,000 words to be written.

In conversion, 350,000 words are on the shelves.

How did you make me explode?

I saw the latest chapter and it was even more painful to wait every day. I understood this night, but I had no choice but to do this thing.

When you upload two updates every day, you have to write the story well, but you can't stop it. How to write it?

If I had known this, I would have been forced to be put on the shelves on September 1st. He had been planning to update 15,000 words every day after it was put on the shelves.

I feel uncomfortable with the slow update. The update of the senior brother in this book broke out. Old readers have also seen it. There is no 20,000 words a day, but it is still fine if it is 13,000 or 15,000.

If you really don’t have the patience to wait for the update, you can wait until October 1st to read it. The writing is highly consistent and you can feel comfortable to read it. You won’t see a similar place and suddenly disappear, making you feel uncomfortable.

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The fourth question [Crashed and collapsed]

As soon as I woke up at 8 o'clock in the morning, I opened the book review area and there were a few readers who I don't know what was going on, and where I was pessimistic.

It collapsed, it collapsed, this book collapsed.

I was puzzled.

The power system seems to be very stable.

The money system doesn't write anything at all.

There are only a few characters.

It was yesterday's plot, pretending to be a thump in Qingzhou, which resonated with the flying swords in the ancient city of Qingzhou. Is this also called collapse?

Then you have never seen it even more collapsed. When you start reciting the Tao Te Ching, the sky is falling, the universe is collapsed, the earth is surging with golden lotus, and the shadow of gods and Buddhas. (Premium and Weiqi).

I have written 1.5 million words in this kind of book. Why do people like to sing bad things?

I've deleted all this post.

It’s terrible to read it. Whether the collapse or not is definitely not a decision can be made suddenly. At least three plots can you see whether the collapse of this book is.

I wasn't angry, I just made it clear, otherwise I would go back and delete the post and some black fans would jump out and say it.

Control comments? Delete posts? Haha, dog author!

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The last question [Preparation question]

I really want to explain this question.

I really like to lay the groundwork when writing books.

Put things in preparation and then pretend not to be too abrupt, or pretend to be too stiff.

So I will spend a lot of time laying the foundation for the plot.

Site description!

Character reaction!

Causes and consequences!

What happened just now!

What are everyone’s psychological thoughts!

I will write it very clearly. For the readers, I may look at ten lines at a glance. At least I have a clear idea when reading and know a little.

But, whenever I lay the groundwork, there will always be readers who stand up and say it.

"Wow! Water and water!"

"Damn, what are you writing in these two chapters? I don't know what you are writing. After writing for a long time, I can summarize the above two sentences, XXXX, XXXXX."

"Can you stop water?"
To be continued...