The first volume is finished and 17.5W words are accumulated.

In the control, even more than a part of it was exceeded. The original plan to write 150,000 words in the first volume, but the additional 25,000 words were added, which was a normal space.

Because the elder brother of the previous book was used as the negative teaching material, he has done a lot of effort in the new book.

The first volume of the "Ye Ping Cultivation of Immortality" is actually the opening story and introduction. I hope everyone can get a score.

It is ten-stage, and you can leave a message in the scoring column below where there are any problems.

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【Scoring column】

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Darkness will give the first volume 8 points by himself.

I originally wanted to give myself a 7 mark, but it was mainly because "everything is difficult to start". I wrote twelve starts, so I added one extra point.

The three points deducted are the three points deducted on [Details], [Rhythm] and [Personal Design].

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Looking back, there are many problems in the first volume, and the simplest one is the "information" issue, which has not been revealed. Most chapters are used to shape the character and write the beginning, but not much foreshadowing is laid, which may be related to the writing style.

I rarely ambush the first volume. When I write a book, I like to set [core points], and everything revolves around this core point.

I know very well what the core of my first volume is, and it is difficult to unfold other foreshadowings. It is true that, 175,000 words, the protagonist is still in the same sect and has no idea about the outside world.

But the story of the first volume is to welcome the second volume.

The second volume is to fight with people, and there is endless fun. All kinds of people will appear, funny characters and pretend characters. At the same time, the second volume is also a volume that I use to spread out the subsequent worldview.

Basically, whether this book can be written in length depends on the response of the second volume.

I won't say much about it, so as not to spoil it.

So thank you, the readers who are still supporting this book so far, thank you!

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[2] This book has been revised again and again. The Qi training technique has been changed from 365 times to 36 times to be perfect. Looking back, it is indeed very exciting to 365 times, but the problem is that it is probably going to collapse! So it is still strong to 36 times, but it is not that scary.

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[3] This book will be available in the early morning of National Day on October 10, so there is still one month free public period. Everyone must remember to subscribe and support when they are busy! Readers and gentlemen are responsible for enjoying the holiday during the National Day, and the night is responsible for making the holidays happy. It is expected that the seven days of National Day will explode, and thanks to the readers and gentlemen!

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【Off Message Mode】

Because this book has brought a group of book friends with extremely low quality.

Most of the posts are, I was so unhappy to read, damn *******! Maybe that's the remarks.

The book review area is naturally good and bad. He understands this point, but rationally discusses it. A certain character is disgusting, and a certain character is not well portrayed, and there is no need for a certain plot to appear. If such comments appear, even if they are criticized, they will not delete the post.

To be honest, it is naturally a good thing to have opinions.

But I don’t like reading this book, this book is too cerebral palsy, this book is XXXX, and this kind of book will be banned in the future.

Everyone has their own preferences. If you don’t like it, you can’t watch it. It’s like you ask a macho like me to watch Duomi, but I definitely can’t accept it. But if you take the role of Duomi, the TV series Duomi is not for adults to watch.

You can't say that people are not good, because they are not for adults at all.

The book of cultivating immortals is for the public to read. It is a little bit lighter and relaxed, and the dark night is very confusing.

I don’t like to click a fork and read this book. I’m not just a book with big reading. I have to squirt a sentence, so I’m better than others?

The key road is like the long night?

I like to squirt so much, go and be a fountain!

So when I see this kind of remarks, I can only ban the words with tears in my eyes.

Discuss rationally, and accept them completely if you are unhappy.

Just because it is not suitable for people who don’t like to watch it, Isn’t this just a person who doesn’t like to eat tofu brain? What’s the point of spraying tofu brain?

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The following is a list of rewards last week

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I turned 78 pages, with 10 names per page. If I typed all of them, it would take more than three hours.

The most terrifying thing is that when you see this chapter, you have to turn at least thirty pages.

So I sincerely thank every readers who rewarded me.

I cried and there were too many people. To express my apology, I will update one more chapter tomorrow, which is considered as compensation!

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A new week!

Please vote for recommendation!

Beg for a small reward!

Don’t tell me that it will be certain next time, because you may not be certain next time!

The baby cried in the dark!
Chapter completed!