Chapter 239: Return of an Old Friend (Added update for leader 20181004211950939)(2/2)
"What trouble could there be?" Jiang Wang smiled calmly and covered up the problem: "It's a great thing that you can come back! I won't talk about the past. Those who bullied you have all received their retribution. What are your thoughts in the future?
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He asked her, what do you think?
Instead of saying, follow me from now on.
He regarded her as a companion and a good friend, but not a lover or even a subordinate.
Although it gave her respect and autonomy.
But the former Zhu Biqiong was just a person with few independent opinions and no idea where she would go.
Zhu Biqiong's eyes darkened again, and she reluctantly asked, "Did you kill Ji Shaoqing?"
"Don't worry, there's no trouble. I'll remember your instructions!" Jiang Wang didn't want her to worry, so he pretended to be relaxed and said with a smile: "A fair duel is a fight between life and death. I live and he dies, there is no grudge between us. That's it.
A simple thing. Tell me about you. Do you want to stay in Qi in the future? "
Zhu Biqiong bit her lower lip again and again, and finally said: "I will go back to Diaohailou."
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ˆps:
What is the process of revising an article?
For example this paragraph:
【It was a slightly thin figure, sitting silently by the pool, wearing a somewhat bulky blue robe. It was the coat that Jiang Wang took off from himself when he sent her to the secret realm of Tianfu. 】
The first paragraph I wrote was:
It was a thin figure wearing a white skirt, sitting silently by the water. The white skirt and long black hair were as clean as the clear water of the Full Moon Lake.
Not the tattered appearance she had when she was sent to the secret realm of Tianfu.
It was then that Jiang Wang suddenly felt apologetic and complained that he had not thought of putting on a clean robe for her at that time.】
After the revision, the reading effect is actually not better. It’s just that sadness was more prominent in the early days, and tenderness became more prominent later.
There may not be the most perfect presentation in the world, and my entanglement may not mean much.
But the meaning of entanglement is that
The final text is the emotion I most want to share with readers at a certain moment.
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I am walking in a vast world, and I hope you can feel me.
(Another: I have felt you in the past two days.)
(Again: Leaders of the alliance, please add readers. If one group is full, add the second group 1159982294 Jixia Academy. Then privately chat with Man Xi slowly to read a book and ask him to invite everyone to join the alliance group. There are only nine people in the alliance group now and we are in urgent need of people.
Chapter completed!