I deleted 40,000 words because of two sentences.
As the title is, because of two sentences of book review.
But it is not my book friend’s book review, but my brother’s book review.
My brother is a great author, who has ordered more than 10,000 yuan.
I begged for a brief introduction.
Then, I saw that in the sentence he pushed, two book friends posted comments at the end of the chapter.
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ps: Recommend a book "Entertainment Master Starts with Children's Songs".
Comments at the end of the chapter:
Book friend 1: This book is average.
Book Friend 2: It's really average.
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Because of these two book reviews, I read the beginning of the book review again, and I kept seeing Chapter 24 from Chapter 1...
I only realized that the first 23 chapters of my tm were both useless, watery, garbage, and procrastinated... I deleted all of them, deleted more than 40,000 words in Chapter 23, and condensed them into one chapter [Chapter 1~23]! Chapter 24 did not change a word.
Therefore, such deletion has no effect on book friends who read it every day, so there is no need to look back.
I just want to tell everyone about their depression and complain.
These two sentences are too hurtful to me, hurting my heart, bones, blood... but there is nothing to say.
I even have to thank them... for making me realize my mistakes and ruined my own high self-esteem.
Thank you, thank you really!—
Thank you too, although my writing is average, I still support my new and old book friends.
The same thing - I didn't give up.
Chapter completed!