After Pan Yun, there was Li Lixi.

When Li Lixi knocked on the door and came in, Sun Quan couldn't help but smile as he looked at his fat face and three-quarter hair style.

Because Li Lixi does seem to live up to his name, which is quite pleasant.

Seeing Sun Quan smile, Li Lixi's anxious heart immediately calmed down a lot. He smiled and sat across from Sun Quan, and asked in a friendly tone: "Boss, how is the revision of my manuscript this time? Is it okay?"

The smile on Sun Quan's lips remained unchanged, but he shook his head slightly, "Not enough! Who did you learn your hydrology skills from? If you could find a small website that offers buyouts, and the other party could give you a buyout price.

, with your hydrology skills, can you bankrupt other people’s websites?”

The smile on Li Lixi's face froze, and his face began to turn red. His expression was stunned and his voice lowered, "Boss, is my writing really bad? I have compressed the 20,000 words into more than 5,000 words according to your request.

Isn’t it enough?”

Sun Quan still shook his head, "Go back and continue to compress! Can you compress the remaining 15,000 words into 5,000 words and send it to me?"

Li Lixi raised his head in surprise and opened his mouth slightly, "Boss, is this compression too harsh? If it is compressed like this, I will have to delete many plots."

Sun Quan asked funnyly: "Are you sure there really is a lot of plot in your fifteen thousand words?"

Li Lixi: "..."

After being speechless for a while, he stood up with his head drooped and said sadly: "Okay! I understand, then if everything is okay, I will go down and continue compressing?"

"etc!"

Sun Quan stopped him because he noticed that Li Lixi was in a defensive mood, so Sun Quan thought about it and said seriously: "Li Xi! Don't think that I am deliberately tormenting you, yes! It is inevitable for anyone who writes online articles.

I have some hydrological habits. Even the great masters have this habit. Very few people can do it without water at all. I am watery too! But the water must have a limit and the water must be in the right place. Your biggest problem now is

Do you know what the problem is?"

Li Lixi frowned and looked at Sun Quan, shaking his head in confusion, "What's the problem?"

Sun Quan smiled and said, "There is no priority! Didn't you find that when you were writing, you gave a lot of pen and ink to any plot, whether it was the main plot or the branch plot, whether it was the main character or the soy sauce-like passerby?

It may be really easy for you to write like this, and you can write two to three thousand words casually, but if you are a reader, are you sure you like reading such novels? When you write, do you have any thoughts about it?

Write it in detail, where should I write it abbreviated? Have you thought about it?"

Li Lixi's brows were still furrowed, but his eyes were already thoughtful.

After a while, he took a deep breath, nodded, and said: "Thank you! Thank you, boss. Your words really woke me up. This is indeed a problem with me. I know how to compress it. Then I'll go

busy?"

Sun Quan smiled and waved his hand.

Seeing Li Lixi leave, Sun Quan pursed his lips, lit a cigarette, and found a folder in the D drive of his computer.

The name of this folder is - New Book Ideas.

After the folder is opened, there are dozens of documents inside. Each document has a name, but looking at the size of each document, the content in each document seems to be very little.

Very few indeed.

This is something he writes down casually when he gets an idea for a new book. Usually he only writes a title and three or two sentences of key information about the inspiration.

For him, this kind of inspiration record records the coordinates of each memory. As long as he opens this folder and sees these simple documents in the folder, he can quickly recall the inspiration that flashed at the beginning.

After these inspirations were recorded, he rarely used them himself.

At least he hasn't used it since he was reborn.

But before his rebirth, he would occasionally look for inspiration in such a folder to start a new book. At that time, he would usually merge several inspirations into one.

With this kind of inspiration, he has written several works that received over a thousand orders for the first time. For some new authors, having an order of over a thousand for the first time is no longer considered a big deal. For some authors with set goals, it can even be said to be a big deal.

good achievement.

But for Mr. Sun, who was still a cripple before his rebirth, works with an initial order of less than 2,000 yuan were always thrown away.

Because with his handicap, he can’t make thousands of dollars a month even if his first order is over a thousand dollars.

Until he later met a fellow tentacle monster who had an initial order of 500 for a work and used an abnormal number of updates to earn more than 200,000 royalties a year.

It was only then that he realized that he could actually make a fortune by ordering over a thousand dollars for the first time, as long as the updates were perverted enough.

At this time, he opened this folder, and the purpose was actually very simple.

——He wanted to combine several inspirations and come up with two simple outlines, and then give those two simple outlines to Hu Cong, let Hu Cong improve them, and then give them to Pan Yun and Li Lixi to write.

As for the outline he currently asked Hu Cong to write, he asked Pan Yun and Li Lixi to revise and compress the beginnings of the two new books. In fact, he was just training their ability to write outlines and articles.

The real situation is - at the beginning, Mr. Sun didn't like any of the outlines written by those three people. The selling points were insufficient, but it was quite difficult to write. It was a typical topic selection with twice the result and half the effort.

Writing a simple outline is not difficult for Sun Quan.

He knew that Hu Cong was good at writing outlines, so he simply used the nine-line method that most authors are accustomed to using. He listed nine lines and wrote a little on each line, as if he was giving Hu Cong a sample.

In an hour, he finished writing one.

Saving the document, he started writing another one.

With his current skills, if he doesn't want to challenge himself, if he just wants to write a simple outline of an interesting and refreshing article, it really won't be difficult.

Because he has read too many similar cool stories before. As long as he identifies a golden finger, he can use that golden finger to extend the plot of the cool stories one by one.

For example, the second simple outline he is writing.

The gold finger he chose was perspective.

The male protagonist's eyes gained the ability to see through an accident.

This kind of writing is really difficult if the writing is high enough. The golden finger can be used in a medical way, using clairvoyance combined with medical skills to treat illnesses and save lives. Who can say that such a book is vulgar?

Say it has no biggie?

But is it easy to write about something as highly professional as medicine and write it realistically so as to make readers feel immersed and convinced?

Even if Mr. Sun writes it himself, he would have to collect a lot of information in advance and study for a long time before he dares to write. And he cannot guarantee the quality of the final product.

If you leave it to the three guys in the studio to write it, they will know 99% of the time without even trying it.

Therefore, he extended this ability of perspective in other directions.

For example, gambling, gambling on stones, helping Sir solve a case, helping Sir find clues or stolen goods hidden by the suspect, etc.

Of course, in this age when the Harmonious Beast has not yet evolved into its final state, the ability to see through can also be used to pick up girls.

The standard of not being able to write below the neck is what Sun Quanhui will use to demand himself.

Because he hopes that the works he wrote in this life will still survive in the future when the beast of harmony becomes more and more fierce.

But when he set up this studio and recruited Hu Cong, Pan Yun and Li Lixi to write manuscripts and sell them for money, the requirements were not so high.

Because he knows very well that most online articles are time-sensitive.

Today is 2009. A few years later, readers have little interest in reading most of the online articles published in 2009. Most readers will subconsciously think that the works from a few years ago are outdated, and it is difficult to feel immersed in them. Some jokes and

Popular terms are also clichéd.

Therefore, even if the works written by Hu Cong, Pan Yun and Li Lixi are eaten by the beast of harmony a few years later, Sun will not care.

Anyway, even if the Harmony Beast doesn't eat the works written by the three of them, no one will read what they wrote, and they won't be able to sell for much money.

In short, Mr. Sun does not have high requirements for the works they write. The most important thing is to earn one vote.

As long as you can earn one vote, that's enough.

…

Two days later.

Hu Cong sent the completely revised outline to Sun Quan's QQ mailbox, and came to Sun Quan's office that afternoon to ask for Sun Quan's opinions.

"Boss, have you read the new outline I sent you this morning?"

After sitting across from Sun Quan's desk, Hu Cong asked humbly, waiting for Sun Quan's comments.

"Wait a moment!"

Sun Quan temporarily saved the manuscript he was typing, logged into QQ, and found the new outline that Hu Cong sent to his mailbox in the morning.

He hasn't watched it yet.

But he still had time to take a few glances now.

Hu Cong, who was sitting opposite him, couldn't see what was on his computer screen and thought Sun Quan was busy with something else, so he could only wait patiently.

Sun Quan spent two or three minutes looking at the new outline written by Hu Cong.

After reading it, he nodded slightly.

Hu Cong's new outline is still written very carefully and neatly, with each item listed in a well-formed manner. At first glance, it looks like it has been carefully written.

In terms of outline writing, Sun Quan admitted in his heart that Hu Cong was more talented than Sun.

After watching for two or three minutes, Sun Quan raised his head and said to Hu Cong: "I have made a lot of progress this time, but I still wrote a little too detailed. There is no need to write an outline in such detail. The detailed parts can be placed in the detailed outline section.

, if you write the outline in such detail, it will easily blur the main line of the outline, which is not conducive to clarifying your own ideas."

Hu Cong nodded while listening. When Sun Quan finished speaking, he smiled and asked, "Then, boss, shall I revise it again?"

As he said that, he got up and left.

Sun Quan raised his right hand and pressed it in the air, "Don't worry! Don't worry about this outline. I will send you a new outline later. You can improve the outline I gave you! Improve a part every day, and do it before get off work every day. , send it to me for a look, and if the completed part of the day is not suitable, I can remind you in time, how about it? No problem? "

Hu Cong was stunned, "You don't want this outline now?"
Chapter completed!