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Chapter 245 Anger at Miss Zhao

"I'll take a look at the ending first and give you time to consider it." Zhao Youyue replied again.

In fact, Zhao Youyue's temper comes and goes quickly, and always maintains a saint calmness. Her style is her style.

She was too lazy to ask why Han Leng was hiding it at the beginning. Didn’t Su Li pretend that she was a male cartoonist at the beginning?

According to Su Li, her works are male-oriented. In order to be able to get along with male readers and listen to their unreserved opinions, she finds it useful to disguise herself as a male creator.

Of course, there are many female readers in youth romance novels. Han Leng pretends to be a female author, and there seems to be nothing wrong with it. If he had revealed his identity from the beginning, Zhao Youyue might not have expressed his opinions so seriously.

However, it is really hard to tell whether "April is really beautiful" is male or female. It should be male in nature. Look at how happy the male protagonist is, and the goddess who has a perfect first love and longing has given him...

Zhao Youyue is actually a very tolerant girl. Perhaps only the person she cares most can make her angry. For example, her arrogant Moma Wang Wu, sometimes she is so angry that she wants to run away from home!

Han Leng obviously hasn't reached this level yet.

But she can't just let her go, and she must be punished for doing something wrong.

Zhao Youyue looked at the finale sent by Han Leng. Although she had already experienced it in the world of works, it was also very interesting to watch how she did it in the world of works by reading text.

There is one thing that Zhao Youyue has always admired in Han Leng, which is his writing style. He is born to be very sensitive to words, and the sentences he writes can often be written as quotations.

Otherwise, why would "April is really beautiful" be called "April is your full-score essay"?

Even loyal fans have excerpted the wonderful sentences in it and created classic Lengzi quotes.

"My world is silent and cannot accommodate others." This is the psychology of the male protagonist depicting the early stage, but Chu Luoxun's music once again made his world full of beautiful music.

"Everyone has a city in his heart, and he will hide in when you want to escape. Some people hide for a long time, while others hide for a short time, but I have never walked out... This is a city in my heart, a ruin in the eyes of others." This is obviously the male protagonist who had a psychological shadow at the beginning, but later, with the help of Chu Luoxun, he finally came out.

"Many people's sadness is just to show that they are sad. In fact, no one in this world can understand the sadness of another person."

"It is more terrifying than those who try to suppress the world with loud voices, let the whole world calm down and listen to you speak in a low voice." When Han Leng wrote this sentence, Miss Zhao was remembered in his mind.

...

The writing style of youth novels is actually the more charming it is, the better it is. It is not an online article, and its selling point is "pretending to slap the face" and "fight monsters and upgrades". Even its plot is not a selling point. Looking at all youth novels, there are very few real exciting plots. Its real selling point is actually a feeling and a resonance! So sometimes the more pretentious the writing style, the more it likes readers.

If a youth novel can make you sigh, miss you, and even make you suddenly feel sad, then it will succeed!

Of course, this requires sentences with texture, which can be used in full-score essays.

Because Zhao Youyue lacks this kind of writing talent, she naturally appreciates Han Leng's literary talent. When reading his articles, you can really read them slowly one by one, because this is a kind of enjoyment.

Zhao Youyue almost finished the finale in one breath. The part about Chu Luoxun perfectly restored what she did in the world of work. She had no objection, it was very perfect, and the text quality reached its peak!

But the ending of the hero and heroine made her frown.

Although Zhao Youyue is not very good at analyzing articles in depth, she also realized that although the male protagonist Gu Yuan still loves the heroine deeply and is gentle and considerate to the heroine, he seems to be treating his relatives. His deep nostalgia for Chu Luoxun has been shown through some small details in the last, making it seem like he actually loves the most is Chu Luoxun.

This is definitely misleading!

Zhao Youyue has experienced everything in the world of works. She knows best that Gu Yuan’s true love is Lin Meiyue, but after Han Leng wrote it, the problem became complicated in an instant, and what Han Leng wrote was what happened in the world of works...

Is this the terrible thing for literati? The same thing is written in different words, and some places are written more, and some places are ignored and not written directly, which turns into two meanings!

This is the so-called Spring and Autumn Brushwork.

In addition, the ending seems to imply that one day, Lin Meiyue will accept the gift from Chu Luoxun and become a "genius composer" and the truth will be revealed!

This is even more in line with Zhao Youyue's expectations. As Chu Luoxun's true body, she willingly achieved Lin Meiyue. She hopes that Lin Meiyue will get better and better, hopes to make up for Lin Meiyue's lack of musical talent, and hopes that she can also become a genius in the eyes of others. In this way, she and Gu Yuan should be more compatible.

According to Zhao Youyue's idea, this matter should never be exposed in the rest of his life. Even if Lin Meiyue "creates" no longer famous songs in the future, it can be used to cover it up after her peak period.

But once this matter is exposed, Lin Meiyue will definitely be ruined, right?

Moreover, Gu Yuan definitely cannot tolerate Lin Meiyue's possession of Chu Luoxun's works, and the beautiful relationship between the two will even break down due to this!

Even if Chu Luoxun dies, she seems to be the culprit for the breakdown of the relationship between the male and female protagonists...

Thinking of this, Zhao Youyue, who is a senior Lin Meiyue Party, will of course be very unhappy, because she simply hopes that the male and female protagonists will come together and be in harmony and love for the rest of her life.

However, because Han Leng deliberately "learned in vain" in some places, Chu Luoxun is suspected of being a "missie". Lin Meiyue calmly possessed Chu Luoxun's original song for love, which seemed to be "Bichi".

Zhao Youyue didn't think much about it before, but now she discovered the sinister intentions of this guy Han Leng!

The ending seems very happy, but in fact, just think about it a little, you will understand that the future of the male and female protagonists is hard to say!

She immediately sent a message to Han Leng, saying bluntly that the ending was inappropriate. If the other party was Leng Zi, she would definitely be much more tactful...

But Han Leng replied faster. He said that women's clothing admits their mistakes, but it is okay to let him change the ending, there is no way!

"I just don't understand why you always favor Gu Yuan and Lin Meiyue. You have been like this from the beginning! Does Chu Luoxun deserve to suffer?"

Han Leng angrily criticized Miss Zhao for the sake of his beloved Goddess Chu!—
Chapter completed!
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