413 Back to the origin
The Railway Bureau will hold a live meeting for the exchange of experiences of the B&A race at the Guhe Train Section, which is a great honor for a grassroots station section. It also states that the "B&A Safety Competition" held by the Guhe Train Section has been recognized by the Railway Bureau and will be promoted overall!
Duan Chang Wu was very excited when he heard this: "Director Zou, thank the leaders of the Road Bureau and the branch for giving us this valuable opportunity in the Guhe Train Section. We will live up to the expectations of the leaders and make this material in detail. You give me 5 days, no no no, no no, 3 days, we will definitely take out the first draft of this experience material!"
"Okay! In 3 days, you can send someone to the transportation department to send the experience materials!" Director Zou said without doubt, because the time limit for transportation to him by the road bureau was 5 days. Wu Fengshan said that the three days were exactly what he wanted, and took out the first draft and asked the transportation department of the branch to organize a few pens to polish it.
Duan Chang put down the phone and called Duan Chang Hu Baoguo and Xiao Yuanhang to his office. While announcing the good news to them, he issued the task of writing experience materials to them. The B&B event was created by Xiao Yuanhang. The safety room has been tracking this matter. Xiao Yuanhang has a good writing style, and the task of the first draft of the experience materials fell on him. Of course, the deadline is 3 days, and the first draft must be taken out within 3 days.
Duan Zhang Hu was very happy to hear this news. The experience of the B&B event was promoted overall. In any case, he, the deputy director in charge of safety, made a contribution. He immediately said that he would let Xiao Yuanhang go back and write quietly. He would do all the logistics work. He didn't have to worry about the work in the safety room, just go back and write the materials.
Although this exchange of experience was expected by Xiao Yuanhang, he was very happy. Although he had been the director of the safety room for too short and it was impossible to promote him because of such an experience, it also added a strong point to his safety career. After two or three years of experience, if there is a chance to be promoted, this is also one of the highlights of his work!
Xiao Yuanhang happily returned to the safety room after taking the mission and found He Hongwei and Liu Shiji for a small meeting, mainly the materials needed for the B&A experience materials. He Hongwei has been tracking B&A activities and has first-hand information and various data in his hand. Liu Shiji assisted and guided He Hongwei's work and also mastered a large amount of B&A materials. After Xiao Yuanhang collected the materials almost, he held this large stack of sub-materials for the afternoon. After reading the materials, he also formed a thought in his mind.
After get off work, Xiao Yuanhang found a clean snack and had supper, so he returned to the house in the city, boiled a pot of boiling water and made tea, and started writing materials in the study. This kind of experience material was not a problem for him at all. As long as he had the material in his hand, it would be easy to form materials.
He spread the manuscript paper and took out a carbon pen produced by the ink-flavor stationery factory. After thinking about it, he wrote the title "How do we carry out the B&B event"! He also considered this topic for a while before he decided. When he analyzed the materials in his hands with He Hongwei and Liu Shiji, he began to consider the topic of this empirical material. A good topic has the finishing touch, and people can tell what is going on at a glance.
At the beginning, he also wanted to make the same propositions according to traditional empirical materials, such as insisting on four in place and carrying out the B&B event in a solid manner; grasping five basis points, implementing five concentrations, and vigorously carrying out the B&B event and other issues. After considering several questions in a row, Xiao Yuanhang felt that it was too vulgar. Finally, he sat at the desk and had a flash of inspiration and wrote this question. This question seemed a bit straightforward, but it made people feel that it was real. Safety work must be done in order to eliminate safety hazards and ensure safety.
Xiao Yuanhang worked hard at his desk for 8 hours. At 2 o'clock in the second half of the night, a 5,000-word experience material was written out, and the last end was put to the end. Xiao Yuanhang immediately modified the material, put down his pen immediately, washed up and went to bed. Because, tonight, he only had this idea in his mind. Even if he wanted to check and modify, he could not jump out of this circle. He had to give his brain a full rest. When he checked it tomorrow, he would find inappropriate and needed modification.
I slept until 9 a.m. After getting up, Xiao Yuanhang got up, he got off two bags for breakfast, and then sat at the desk to check and modify the materials. After his mind was clear, he also found several unobstructed places. These places were mainly loopholes in the layout, so he made timely adjustments and moistened the language. This experience material was basically formed.
I went home at noon and had dinner with my parents. In the afternoon, I went to the unit and gave the draft to He Hongwei and asked her to copy it. More than 5,000 words were a difficult job. He Hongwei didn't copy it until he was about to get off work.
Xiao Yuanhang came to Wu Fengshan's office with the manuscript. Duan Zhang Wu saw that Xiao Yuanhang had taken out the first draft in two days. Although he was about to get off work, he still started reading it seriously. Duan Zhang Wu's writing skills were also very skilled. He read it in one go with more than 5,000 words of experience. It was very smooth and there was no feeling of blocking. Moreover, he spoke with data, which was very convincing. He could basically not find any fault.
Wu Fengshan put down the manuscript and said, "Xiao Xiao, the experience materials you wrote are concise, the data are detailed, and the sense of rhythm is well grasped. The branch asked us to get the first draft. I think it would be great. You will take a bus to Tongshui tomorrow morning and hand it over to the transportation department chief Zhang Guoxin!"
The next day, Xiao Yuanhang took the morning bus to Tongshui. He arrived at the transportation department of the branch. He found Zhang Guoxin, the transportation department chief, and gave him the materials. In the morning, Wu Fengshan called Section Chief Zhang and said that Director Xiao from the safety room came to deliver the materials and could arrive at around 9 o'clock. Zhang Guoxin had never seen Xiao Yuanhang and thought that Director Xiao would have to be thirty or forty years old. Unexpectedly, he was so young, and he felt like a high school student!
Section Chief Zhang looked at the materials and felt that they were basically formed, but he was a traditional cadre. How could this topic be awkward? After thinking about it, Director Zou has already selected two pens from the branch office to help us modify the materials. The first draft was written by you, and you have the first-hand information of B&A. In this way, you stay and modify the materials with two big pens. I will find them now.
The two pens were both secretaries of the branch office and they usually wrote materials for the director or deputy book director. After the two came, Section Chief Zhang put forward five revisions, the first of which was to revise the topic. Xiao Yuanhang had been with them at the branch office for two days, and the experience materials were modified for three or four drafts and sent to Director Zou, but they were not approved. After the fourth draft was released, he was already full of all faces. Xiao Yuanhang could not recognize that the place was written by himself!
Xiao Yuanhang also knew the principle of revising a masterpiece, but the change of the article was far from his original intention. The reason why Director Zou could not pass was not that the materials they wrote were not good at, but that they followed the old routines of official documents, official words, clichés, and even nonsense. Director Zou felt that there was no new idea of highlights. Seeing that the time stipulated by the Road Bureau was about to come, Director Zou was furious and called the two pens together with the deputy chief of the Transportation Department and Xiao Yuanhang, and organized himself to study how to write this experience material.
During the research process, Director Zou accidentally saw the original manuscript brought by Xiao Yuanhang. After seeing the title, his eyes lit up. He picked it up and read it carefully. After reading it, he said loudly: "This material is very good. Why don't you show it to me?"
Section Chief Zhang took a look and found that it was the first draft brought by Xiao Yuanhang. His expression was very awkward and said embarrassedly: "This is the original draft brought by Xiao Xiao. I feel it is a bit too straightforward, tit, tit..."
Chapter completed!