Thank you for your corrections, thank you for your participation
I have a lot of ideas in this article. I am studying hastily. Maybe I can't learn it well, but what I can contribute is attitude.
I absolutely believe that many readers have very professional people.
I hope that in the future, when I write in a more 'hardcore' place, readers who have been with me all the way can give me corrections at any time.
I will not defend myself, I will study hard, and then read the materials repeatedly, striving for more rigorous writing.
After all, I always feel that writing is professional, and at least maintain a professional spirit.
But for more professionalism, I hope everyone can extend their helping hand.
When I came back from the dinner today, I read everyone’s opinions and made adjustments and modifications to the words in the three places with the most opinions.
For references, I don’t post very much on the website, just write the name, and everyone searches.
"The Story of Cancer and Immunity"
Additional modifications in the article:
Original text: But unfortunately, before he got the result, he got a terrible fact. After moving the mitochondria, cancer occurred.
Revised: But unfortunately, he had not yet obtained the result and got a terrible fact. After moving the mitochondria, cancer will occur. Because its strength will lead to infinite replication of cells, and these cells will not play the role of normal cells, but will also break monsters and erode normal cells. This is cancer cell.
Original text: This formed the first real complex cell, the swallowed archaeologist turned into an organelle, that is, the chloroplasts in plants and the mitochondria in our cells.
Change: This formed the first real complex cell, the swallowed archaeologist turned into an organelle, that is, the chloroplast in the plant and the mitochondria in our cells. Of course, there are also mitochondria in the organelle of the plant.
This sentence is purely because I am not rigorous enough.
References: An explanation of Dr. Sun Yueli’s aging. Because it is a direct answer to other people’s questions, there is no title.
I will not explain the specific details in this single chapter, and the changes are as follows.
Original text: Moreover, mitochondria can be consumed. You can even read your lifespan from mitochondria. The shorter the mitochondria, the closer the human life is to the end. On the contrary, this is still a fresh life. Of course, I mean without the occurrence of lesions.
Change: Moreover, mitochondria can be consumed. You can even read your lifespan from mitochondria. The weaker the mitochondria, the closer the human life will be to the end. On the contrary, this is still a fresh life. Of course, I mean without the occurrence of lesions.
This is the most rigorous expression.
Later, according to the structure of "Dark Moon Era", more "hardcore" descriptions will inevitably be involved.
Online articles are a relatively special publication situation, which requires timely updates and quantitative updates.
In the daily updates, I will try to be rigorous.
In fact, I also hope to be calm and put aside the troubles and slow down the writing of "Dark Moon", but I also have a lot of burdens and I dare not slow down.
If you have professional knowledge on certain knowledge points, please try to help me and be more rigorous.
This is my original intention that I cannot give up. So what if I have online articles? There are so many readers who read it, including many students.
The article conveys the truth. Perhaps it is not that I want to say a profound truth, but that the things written in the article should not be conveyed to everyone with a wrong message or a wrong view.
Here, thank you everyone, "Dark Moon" has accompanied me along the way.
Chapter completed!