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224 Change the script(1/2)

Before going to bed at night, Yang Jian and Liu Xiaoliu ignored each other. I saw that Liu Xiaoliu had made up his mind, so I went to talk to Yang Jian: "Second brother, we can't control such things. First there is Magic Liqing and then Xiaoliu. You are the great gods in the sky. Here are just a group of ordinary men and women. Take you and Lula as an example. At her age, you can guarantee that you have never been moved?"

Yang Jian sighed and said, "So the world is really an evil place. It will be fine for anyone to come here. I will never come again!"

...

In the next few days, I began to prepare for the Spring Festival Gala in full swing, specifically calling local well-known companies on the Yellow Pages to attract sponsorship, because I realized that money must be in place for such a large line of money, and then it was unreliable for me to let anyone come up with a program in the past. The Spring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people, no matter what. The Spring Festival Gala is of great significance from any angle. Even if I can't do it beautifully, at least I have to be at the level line.

It is down. For example, if someone has a good review rate of only 40%, and if I have a good review rate of 20%, it is considered as a barely handover. It is like running a marathon. A top athlete has won the championship in 4 hours. You came back while running and strolling for 10 hours. Others are embarrassed to say anything about you, but if you use it for three days and two nights, the organizer will not wait for you. If you really start a community association, Mayor Wang will probably be subject to double regulations. I can't be injustice.

But the result is sad. Many people in companies hang up the phone when they hear that I am the director of the Spring Festival Gala this year. Even if they contact their boss and leaders, the conditions are extremely harsh. Not only do they refuse to pay the right price, but they also have to tailor-made embedded advertisements - it is even a direct advertisement. A company selling brain-health products made a request to me to make a sequel to "Selling Killer", saying that Fan Wei finally fooled Zhao Benshan because he drank the products of their company. There is a family selling mineral water that requires that all the people in our party place have mineral water on their factory. It is fine if we ask that the audience drink a close-up of the special drink every fifteen minutes on average. The boss of a company wants to arrange his mistress in as a host, and he must let the mistress interact with the magician of this party like Dong Qing...

After calling two days, I was full of lawsuits and slapped the table and said, "Why are people nowadays shameless!"

The doll sat next to me and said, "The one who seems to be the most shameless is you - rely on your connections to contract the Spring Festival Gala and ask for money from others one by one."

I said with a heartache: "But our original intention is to give everyone a happy party!"

The doll said, "Anyway, I don't believe this!" She said guiltily, "Xiaoqiang, I see we have to smash this evening party!"

I collapsed and said, "Why didn't you expect this?"

The doll said: "Didn't I say it? During those days, my stomach doesn't hurt and my head will be good..."

At this moment, Mo Liqing called and said, "Xiaoqiang told you good news. Su Moyu agreed to the Spring Festival Gala. He initially decided to sponsor you 2 million yuan, and the program has been released in the past two days. It is a sketch."

I was surprised and said, "So quickly? What did that sketch say?"

Mo Liqing said: "I haven't seen it yet."

I said, “When can I see it?”

"It's OK at any time, and the actors are decided, as if they were Ningbo and Wang Yu."

"Ningbo and Wang Yu?" I was a little surprised. These two actors are very popular locally and have a certain reputation across the country. They are the kind of quasi-first-class comedians who will not make people feel abrupt when they appear on CCTV Spring Festival Gala.

I thought for a while and said, "Then can you take them to the studio at noon? I'll have a preliminary review first."

"Can!"

After hanging up the phone, I immediately notified the whole group to gather. The days were getting closer and closer. I, the director, still had no news. This was also an opportunity to boost morale.

Before lunch, everyone from the crew arrived, and Wang Zheng hid in the crowd and sneaked in to inquire about the news with others.

I clapped my hands and said, "Everyone, today is the first time to review the program, and by the way, it is also the first actual combat of this program team. I hope to have a good start. This program will be sponsored by Chengda Group in a while, so everyone can help me check it."

There were whispers below, and Su Moyu's Chengda Group was well-known. Everyone could not have expected that I would get sponsorship so soon.

In a short while, Mo Liqing appeared with Ningbo Wang Yu. The arrival of the two stars surprised the staff. Su Moyu's personal assistant Liu Annie was accompanied.

I was about to have a greeting with the two stars, but Annie Liu said, "Don't waste time, let's start right away."

...

After everyone took their own lighting props, the first person to appear was Liu Annie. She played a sales lady in the sketch. The most conspicuous prop in this sketch is a sign with "Heyuan Huashu" printed on it - that was the property recently opened by Chengda Group.

Wang Zheng curled his lips and said, "This advertisement is too eye-catching, right?"

I didn't say anything, but I felt awkward in my heart. Anyway, if the audience saw such blatant embedding, they would definitely scold the organizer's eight generations of ancestors. At the same time, they also had opinions about Su Mo Yu. After all, they would have the face of Mo Liqing. She was so merciless.

Next, when Wang Yu came on stage, Liu Annie saw the customer and began to vigorously promote the house. Wang Yu looked like he had eaten and saw it, and was picky about houses of various types, and often hit the mark, which played a certain role in complaining about the current situation.

I whispered to the doll, "The beginning is OK."

Liu Annie began to find out Wang Yu's details and learned that he lives alone now and his children are working hard all year round (Wang Yu is relatively old). Then she played the family card and asked Wang Yu to buy a big house and bring all his children to share the joy of family. After hearing this, Wang Yu's eyes shone and happily swiped his card to buy a house.

I held my chin and said to the doll, "This is a bit irritating."

Ningbo hurriedly came on stage, his identity was Wang Yu's son. After finding Wang Yu, he felt relieved and explained to Liu Annie that his father had mild Alzheimer's disease and his mind was not very good. Liu Annie turned into an angel saint, insisting on returning the money that Wang Yu had paid to Ningbo, saying that they could not take advantage of others' danger. Wang Yu suddenly had a long relationship and said that he was not confused at all. He knew that his son's career was not easy and bought a house to help his son invest in case. Ningbo was moved and cried, and changed his mind to buy the house. The father and son thanked Liu Annie for letting them see each other's sincerity. Ningbo decided to decorate the house and spend his old age with Wang Yu... The three of them died happily.

I was stunned after seeing it. What kind of magical twist is this?

The doll touched me and said, "What do you think now?"

I sighed and said, "It's a bit disgusting..." To be honest, if this sketch does not have the words "Heyuan Huashu", it is just a common work that is sensational and sensational, with both beginning and end. Although the emotional drama is a bit mentally retarded, it is also in line with positive energy and mainstream. However, with this big advertisement as a prerequisite, it will become something that praises morality and flattery. I want to vomit to be true!

The staff at the audience were speechless after watching the show, and no one took the initiative to express their opinions. Wang Zheng said, "Didn't Director Zhen say he is afraid of attracting sponsorship to affect his creation? This show is worry-free and we don't need to create it at all, haha."

Although Mo Liqing was a little slower, he couldn't watch it anymore. He whispered to me: "Xiaoqiang, don't get me wrong. This show was not done by Su Moyu instructed. I heard that the employees of their company were preparing to perform at this year's internal annual meeting. I didn't expect it to be like this."

I suddenly realized that if I was playing around with the New Year, it would be different. I blatantly flattered myself and couldn't say anything. It was just a joke. This vice president played Alzheimer's disease, and the manager played a son. The funny thing was different, but if you took it out to the world, it would be disgusting and treat the audience as mentally retarded!

At this moment, Annie Liu came with two actors and asked me: "How is it?"

I nodded and said, "Not bad."

Wang Zheng screamed exaggeratedly, and the crew continued to silence. Letting such a show on the Spring Festival Gala was definitely a satirical mockery of the production staff, but everyone was holding it in, and no one was willing to offend people and be the first to be the first.

Liu Annie said: "That's it, you know the program time. You arranged a better time period on that day, so we won't come in the rehearsal. You also know that the schedules of the two big names, Ning Wang, are very full." As she said that, she was about to leave.

I waved and said, "No hurry, there are a few small places that may need to be changed."

Annie Liu said: "Which places?"

I said, "I'll ask you first, who wrote the script?"

Annie Liu said: "A small employee in our company, why are you not satisfied?"

"That..." I gestured randomly, "The ones ahead are OK, but can we change the theme of this sketch?"

“What’s it like?”

"Can it be changed to being unable to afford a house for ordinary people?"

The audience was stunned...

Liu Annie laughed and said, "Mr. Zhen, are you kidding? Our main production of Chengda Group is real estate. You say that ordinary people can't afford a house. Isn't this slap our company in the face?"

I spread my hands and said, "It's useless for you to embellish the peace. Most people really can't afford it. The son in your sketch did not introduce the background. Why is buying a house as easy as buying roasted sweet potatoes? Unless you say he is a rich second generation, but his father is so idiot, and he doesn't look like that."

Annie Liu helplessly said: "If you really change this way, wouldn't it cause trouble for the people during the New Year?"

I said, "That's two different things. I was fooled by a few words and said that I would buy a house. That's a big deal. Such stupid people have money to buy a house. We are not as good as him, right?" I apologized to Ning and Wang and said, "I'm sorry, the role I'm talking about is not about two."

Ningbo said nothing: "Don't worry, we are all professional actors."

Annie Liu patiently said, "Then how do you think you can change it?"

"The previous section is very good, and when the sensation in the middle it will turn a sharp turn..." I said while rectifying my thoughts, "It would be great if I could always maintain the complaint mode. For example, when you started playing the family card, the old man discovered it and continued to complain about your sales lady. Then my son came, and you changed the lobbyist to your son. It was easy for the son to be fooled. He said on the spot that he wanted to buy a house for his father to support his father..."

Annie Liu said: "In this way, the whole sketch will be no longer ideological."

"You've finished listening to me. I didn't buy my son's account. I said that having a house does not mean having happiness. He is still alone. It's better to go and dance square dance. My son bought a unit from you when he was impulsive, and opened up and downstairs. He also promised to bring the old man's old friends together..."

Annie Liu nodded slightly and said, "This has indeed improved a lot, and then what?"

"And-" I can't make up any more...

The doll said with slightest thought: "Why do I think this son is more ill than me?"

I slapped my thighs and said, "By the way, the car from the neurological hospital came and took my son away. These two guys ran out while the doctor was not paying attention."

Wang Yu said funny: "With the two of us, we will play two crazy things?"

Ningbo couldn't help laughing and said, "This change will work well, and it may become popular!" They also knew that the annual meeting version was a dead end.

After listening to my opinion, Liu Annie was stunned and said, "Mr. Zhen, are you serious or joking?"

I said, "I'm very serious! Don't pursue any thoughts at all. Just make two crazy people have a carnival in the real estate you have developed. Let people laugh and remember your company. Isn't this a win-win situation?"

Annie Liu jumped up and said, "What do people think of us? The people who went to our house to buy a house for a long time were all crazy?"

I held her down and said, "You are over-interpreting, definitely over-interpreting!"

Annie Liu rolled up her sleeves and looked like she was trying to fight me desperately and said, "Okay, who will change the script? I know you don't have much time."

I looked around and found no one who could help me. Our working group was just a primary recording configuration, with neither producer nor screenwriter. I gritted my teeth and said, "Isn't it time for dinner? You have dinner first, I'll modify the script!"

Annie Liu rolled her eyes and said, "Do you think you are really the director, and you have also changed the script..."

Mo Liqing said: "You just let Xiaoqiang try it."

Liu Anni knew that Mo Liqing was Su Moyu's lover, so she had to swallow her anger. Wang Yu and Ningbo had no objection either, and the two were happy to wait for the show business to buy lunch boxes.

As a result, I was really modifying the script when others were having dinner. I took the first draft of the annual meeting version and crossed out the dialogues starting from the middle one by one with a black pen. Later, I simply tore up all the last few pages...

The doll held the lunch box and fed it to my mouth while eating it by himself, asking, "Are you really okay?"

Yang Jian squatted beside him and said, "Don't interfere with him."

I looked at the dialogue in front carefully and found that the funny points were not designed very cleverly. Most of them were based on the exaggerated tone of the characters. This was actually the lowest-level method for me who wrote funny novels. My novel was famous for being unresponsive! Later, I simply started from scratch and wrote a chapter step by step according to the outline of the sales center of two crazy people.

After everyone finished their meal, Wang Zheng walked over and said, "How is Director Zhen's script changing?"

I handed him a stack of paper and said, "Go and copy three copies and let the actors rearrange it once!"

Wang Zheng was stunned for a moment and came back soon.

I handed over the new script to Liu Annie and others and said, "I don't have time to memorize the lines, so you can read it as you like."

The photographer asked me: "Director Zhen, do you need to press the camera position?"

"Car? What is a cab?"

The photographer held back a smile and said, "It's where everyone is on the stage - do you ask them to stand and read or walk in their original position?"
To be continued...
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