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Chapter 3317 Inadequacies

"Yes, at least I have noticed the deep meaning of this book from the erotic content of "Jin Ping Mei"." Bai Wenbin laughed and scratched his head, "I will never read Xiao Huang's book again in the future."

Everyone laughed and were happy, and they benefited a lot.

Bai Wenli stood up and said excitedly: "Then I'll go upstairs to get the manuscript, mom and dad, younger brother and sister, and eldest nephew, please help me see it. Fortunately, what's wrong?"

"Okay!" Everyone was no longer sleepy at noon today, and it was rare for the family to talk together calmly.

Bai Wenli wrote all novellas, with a total of three articles, one of which is about 100,000 words. Each stroke is written carefully by Bai Wenli, and the manuscripts submitted were copied by Bai Wenli.

Although it is not long, it will not be able to finish it for a while.

"Don't rush this time, you can watch it slowly. Jingxuan, go up and rest, don't be tired." Although Bai Wenli really hopes to get the evaluation of her family, she also knows that reading novels takes time, "Wenbin, you carry Jingxuan on your back."

"Okay!" Bai Wenbin put down the manuscript and carried Bai Jingxuan back.

Bai Yixiu and Sun Yingying also returned to the room. They were not sleepy and continued to read the manuscript. They waited until 2:30 in the afternoon to finish reading the novel.

"Tell me what you think." Bai Yixiu put the manuscript on the bedside table.

Sun Yingying chuckled, "The words are gorgeous, sometimes the characters are described in a long paragraph. Although the words used are gorgeous, I don't want to read them, so I can just scan them. In addition, the plot structure is scattered, and the story progression is not progressive layer by layer, which is somewhat illogical."

Bai Yixiu laughed and said, "It's really boring to write. The writing technique is too deliberate, not concise, and the plot is not refreshing. If I were an editor, I would reject the manuscript."

"That's right, but our daughter is determined to publish and publish, and she must make her realize her shortcomings and change her shortcomings in order to make progress." Sun Yingying said, "The reason why she has a good impression of Shang Wenjun and even admires Shang Wenjun is because Shang Wenjun published articles and poems in some magazines? If our daughter can publish and publish, it proves that our daughter is better than Shang Wenjun. When she achieves more and more achievements in literature, her eyes will be higher and farther, so naturally she will not only focus on Shang Wenjun."

Bai Yixiu thought about it and felt that Sun Yingying was right, "Yes, why don't we spend money to publish it for her?"

Sun Yingying glared at Bai Yixiu, "That's how you spoil your children, how can your children make progress? We not only need to help Wenli find their own problems, but also encourage and create conditions to make her realize her shortcomings, and then she will improve her efforts. Since physical publication cannot be published, we can first encourage Wenli to publish novels on the Internet. By the way, online novel websites, are there now?"

Bai Yixiu thought carefully, but he didn't have a definite memory of this. "Now there are computers and Internet cafes are open a lot, and the Internet will become more and more popular, so there should be one."

Sun Yingying nodded, "I remember there is a website called Qidian Novel in my memory. It seems to be established quite early. Otherwise, now I go to the Internet cafe to surf the Internet? If so, and Wenli is willing to publish it on the Internet, we will buy a computer for Wenli, install the Internet, and support her creation."

"Okay!" Bai Yixiu nodded, "Then let's click out the shortcomings of her novels first."
Chapter completed!
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