【220】The words of flattery
After putting away these little thoughts, Lin Yiran continued to watch and had to go out to find Zhang Yang later. He had to finish reading before he could decide what to do to him later.
Halfway through writing in Xiangyang, Guo Xiang was still alive and dying. Zhang Yang, the bastard, really changed his perspective. As Guo Jing thought, he began to write about the situation on Yang Guo's side.
There is a pool at the bottom of the cliff, and Yang Guo is not dead. This is all things that I have known through the previous article. However, the first time I saw it through Yang Guo’s perspective, I still feel like I finally felt at ease.
At the same time, greater expectations are getting stronger and stronger: Yang Guo and Guo Xiang both jumped off the cliff and did not die, so what about Xiaolongnu?
Continue to look down, with the beehive and the human traces, the result of Xiaolongnu's not dying was almost out, but when Yang Guo passed through the big hole at the bottom of the pond and found Xiaolongnu's residence, he still felt a little excited, and he felt that Yang Long Party was also very good...
What should I do if Xiao Guoxiang?
This thought flashed through her mind and saw Yang Guo crying in the thatched hut where Xiaolongnu lived. Suddenly, a soft hand gently stroked his hair and asked softly: "Guoer, what's wrong with it?" This tone, the way he stroked his hair, was like Xiaolongnu comforting him in the past. Yang Guo turned around...
Lin Yiran read this passage twice, and there was still a sense of unreality. Just reunited?
That's it?
She secretly wrote Zhang Yang in her little notebook: You are looking forward to the reunion that you have been writing like this? But she continued to read it and saw "Yang Guocai: "Long'er, your appearance has not changed at all, but I am old." Xiaolongnu stared at her eyes and said, "It's not that I'm old, but that my Guo'er has grown up." At this time, I remembered the experiences since Yang Guo first met Xiaolongnu, and I felt secretly moved.
Then I looked at Yang Guo and said, "Do you know that it is better to be affectionate. If my heart is fading from missing you, but I just cried loudly in front of the heartbreak cliff, and I will not see you again in my life." Then I couldn't help but think about it again. If I had been separated from Zhang Yang for sixteen years, would he still like him like this?
Is this the love that you imagine or ideally?
She remembered the test of Yang Guo that Zhang Yang once said, sixteen years... was the last test, right?
Yang Guo and Xiaolongnu returned to the cliff along the rope ladder left by Huang Rong and others, and came to Xiangyang again from the perspective. Guo Jing and others arranged according to Huang Yaoshi and rescued Guo Xiang. However, the Mongolian army attacked Xiangyang and had to retreat to defend the city wall. When Guo Xiang was dying, he was still worried about Yang Guo...
Seeing this, Lin Yiran found that it seemed that Xiao Guoxiang seemed to be more cute, but Yang Guo was already with Xiaolongnu, what else could he do?
Perhaps because of this thought, Yang Guo and Xiaolongnu arrived. Yang Guo fought against the Golden Wheel Dharma King for many dangers, but she didn't think anything was wrong. Later, she felt a little surprised when she saw Yang Guo killing the Mongolian Khan.
Although she had good grades, she was not very clear about this history. Zhang Yang studied history major. Seeing this, she couldn't help but wonder, was the Mongolian Khan really dead under the city of Xiangyang in history?
Looking further back, Yang Guo made great contributions. With the welcome of the military and civilians in the city, he joined hands with Guo Jing to the city. It was the peak of his life. When she saw Yang Guo reunion with Xiaolongnu, she was only moved, but when she saw Yang Guo reflect: "More than 20 years ago, Uncle Guo also took my hand and sent me to the Chongyang Palace in Zhongnan Mountain to study skills. He was sincere to me, and never had any difference. But I was arrogant and sergeant against the teacher, how big a disaster would it take! If I finally went astray, how could I have entered the city with him today?" But I almost burst into tears.
The matter in Xiangyang is temporarily set, and Guo Jing said he would go to Huashan to pay homage to the tomb of Hong Qigong. Obviously, the last time was to discuss swordsmanship in Huashan.
Lin Yiran didn't care much about this. For her, even if the ending was just like this, there was nothing left. The only thing she felt regret or was worried about was Guo Xiang.
At the end of the article, there is another note that quotes the records in "History of Yuan Dynasty" and "Xutongjian" to explain the death of the Mongol Khan: in history, he died of the attack on chongqing, and in order to increase the interest of the novel, he died of the attack on Xiangyang.
After watching it, Lin Yiran sat in the piano room and was stunned. Although it was not over yet, she still felt a little sad and thought to herself: "Will Xiaolongnu have a baby after getting married to Yang Guo? What will she become?"
She came out of the sacred spirit, looked at the time, stretched, and stood up to send a message to Zhang Yang: "I've finished reading."
Zhang Yang quickly replied: "Then will I go find you, or will you come here?"
Lin Yiran's heart was shocked. It was rare that parents were not at home... but Aunt Kong was still there... so she replied to Zhang Yang: "I'll go find you."
"good."
The sun was very bright and warm today. Lin Yiran changed into a white knitted skirt, wore a cashmere coat outside, looked at the mirror, nodded with satisfaction, and took his bag downstairs.
Before Yuan Tong arrived, she went downstairs and waited for a while, using her mobile phone to browse the discussion on the Internet about "The Legend of Condor Heroes".
As the second plot climax after "What is Love", due to the upcoming ending and Yang Long who had already made the foreshadowing in advance, the attention this time has attracted on the Internet and the discussion craze is the first time in the history of martial arts novels. Lin Yiran just finished watching the serialization at this time and found that the related discussions on the two platforms of Fangtang and Diting have been topped at the top of the hot list.
Among them, the most talked about is the reunion of Yang Long and the killing of the Mongolian Khan to resolve the crisis in Xiangyang. There are many people who share the same feelings with her, who are complaining about the reunion of Yang Long.
"I'm looking forward to the reunion for so long, and it's too dull, right?"
Lin Yiran browsed it and probably because the time was too short, she didn't see any objection speech. She wrinkled her nose and immediately typed to refute:
This passage is very well written, but it is not that sensational.
Since Yang Long and the other two separated, all the preparations and descriptions of the reunion, especially the process of Yang Guo waiting for Xiaolongnu, whose hair was white, crying and yelling, and jumping off the cliff, were written to the extreme sensationality. Of course, it may not be appropriate to say that it is "sensationality", but it should be said that it is "moving".
Including others, Guo Xiang, Huang Rong and others' reactions and actions towards this matter were all "moving". Only when they met again did they turn into "quietness".
Yang and Long have experienced great joys and sorrows in the world, so there is no need to use any gorgeous words and extraordinary scenes to express their emotions at this moment, and nothing can express their emotions at this moment better than such a plain and ordinary reunion.
It is a very clever way to write it first and then slow. Zhang Muzhi used the vigorous thirty-eight chapters of the previous chapters to return to the calm and plainness of the last paragraph, which is a very consistent and implicit expression technique that conforms to the traditional aesthetic restraint and implicit expression method.
The previous article mentioned Su Shi's "Jiangchengzi", which started with "Ten Years of Life and Death", but at the end of the poem, it only belongs to "the small window, dressing up. It is relatively speechless, but only tears flow thousands of times."
Colorful sleeves hold the jade bell with diligent support, but when I was fighting, I was drunk with red faces. I danced low on the willow building and the moon was singing, and the wind was singing at the bottom of the peach blossom fan.
The reunion in Yan Jidao's writing begins with such a gorgeous and beautiful scene description, and ultimately belongs to the sentence "I am still afraid that meeting is in a dream."
This is the scene and the emotions that should be there. If the passion and sorrow of the first thirty-eight chapters continue, it will be a cliché, and it will not be the familiar Zhang Muzhi that we all love.
She wanted to write again, but Yuan Tong called and said that he was downstairs, so he went downstairs first and added another sentence in the elevator, "In the end, what do I want to say is that I actually like Xiao Guoxiang more, what should I do if Guo Xiang?" Then he sent it out.
After I just posted it, I didn’t have much meeting and I received likes or comments one after another. Lin Yiran was a little surprised. Unexpectedly, a simple flattery article was even more agreeable, especially when I saw many people saying "I feel the same way if I say it too well", I couldn’t help but doubt my life.
"I just brag about it, are you guys taking it seriously?"
She regretted it a little and wanted to delete this answer, but she hesitated and stayed there. She just chose to be anonymous so that she would not be discovered by Zhang Yang. How embarrassed would she be.
Still on the way, she continued to look at the answers beside her and found that someone noticed Guo Jing's reaction description after learning that Yang Guo jumped off the cliff, but the focus was basically on the aspects of "Guo Jing is kind and Guo Jing is really good to Yang Guo", and no one cared about Huang Rong's identity and status, and Huang Yaoshi's silence.
On the contrary, someone wrote a point that she didn't pay much attention to.
When Yang Guo was at the bottom of the cliff, he saw someone leaving a letter: "Yideng, Botong, Yinggu, Rong, Ying, Wushuang, so I didn't meet Yang Guo, and I often returned."
So the question is, who carved the characters? Whose name is missing
The answer is: Huang Yaoshi!
Huang Yaoshi's temperament is fully expressed through this passage of words. He has to admire Zhang Muzhi's statement. Even these two lines of words can express his character's temperament through words.
Lin Yiran recalled it and didn't remember whether it was written in the original text, but it seemed quite reasonable anyway, so he happily gave a thumbs up.
Soon they arrived at Zhang Yang's residence. The two had to go out later, so they did not let Yuan Tong go back. However, they heard that the two had to go out later, so Yuan Tong did not go up and said they were strolling downstairs.
Lin Yiran naturally understood whether he was walking around and why. He was embarrassed, but he still didn't say anything.
There was a young woman in the elevator hall who looked less than 30 years old, with a little boy waiting for the elevator. When she saw Lin Yiran, she was stunned for a moment and then looked at her carefully.
Lin Yiran smiled at her, the woman smiled, and then asked in a low voice: "Are you... Lin Yiran?"
Lin Yiran nodded. The woman looked very surprised and asked in confusion: "Why are you here? Do you live here? What floor?"
Lin Yiran smiled and said, "No, I'll come to find Zhang Yang."
She has been here often for more than half a year. Originally, many people seemed a little "rare" to meet each other, but after meeting them many times, they got used to it. It has not encountered such a situation for many days.
However, it was obviously the first time the person in front of him knew it. He opened his eyes wide in surprise and asked, "Does Zhang Yang live here? I don't even know!"
Lin Yiran nodded with a smile, and then the elevator came in. The two of them entered the elevator. The woman excitedly told Lin Yiran how she liked Zhang Yang's songs, and even forgot her son. If Lin Yiran hadn't reminded him, she would have left her son outside the elevator.
"When I was young, I liked so many things, and I still liked them now, but I don't like them anymore. If I like them, I don't chase them anymore. At most, I just listen to new songs occasionally..."
Lin Yiran asked curiously: "Why?"
"I'm married and have children again, how can I still be like a child?"
This answer made Lin Yiran think of Huang Rong again. Her thoughts surged, but she still had a gentle and polite smile on her face. She chatted with the young mother for a while. After the elevator stopped, she smiled and waved goodbye to her, and then she left the elevator.
She opened the door with the key, walked in gently, closed the door, and saw Haha running from the study, like the rabbit waiting for the rabbit, with a "bang" sound, and hit her ankle with one head.
Lin Yiran hung her coat, bent down with some amusement and picked it up, and went into the study. Zhang Yang typed in front of the computer. He probably heard the sound of haha hitting someone, and noticed that she was coming, turned around and looked over, and then continued to turn around and type.
Lin Yiran held Haha and sat down next to him. Seeing him writing "Three-Body Problem", he poked his head and watched for a while without disturbing him. He watched silently for a while. The roughly said that Ye Wenjie met a foreigner who protected birds. Both of them were desperate about the earth's civilization. Ye Wenjie told him the secret of the Three-Body Problem civilization.
One of them wrote and the other read. After a while, Zhang Yang stopped and Lin Yiran asked: "Did they create the Earth Trisomy?"
"yes."
Zhang Yang lifted Haha out of her arms and wanted to throw it aside. Lin Yiran called out "ah" and grabbed his hand to save Haha before landing. Zhang Yang had to give up, glanced at the delicate and undulating figure under her skirt, reached out to hug her waist, and was pushed away by Lin Yiran with a red face. He had to sigh and hold her hand.
Lin Yiranheng glanced at him and pulled his hand back. Zhang Yang was about to protest, but she held her hand in one hand and moved the chair to him with the other. After sitting down, she smiled at him and stretched out her hand to him.
Zhang Yang rolled her eyes and pushed her hand away. Lin Yiran smiled and reached out to hold his hand. Zhang Yang forgave her a lot.
Lin Yiran asked while looking at what he had just written: "Have you negotiated with the publishing house?"
"It's almost done."
Zhang Yang glanced at him haha, resisting the idea of replacing him, "But the contract has not been signed yet, I haven't finished writing it anyway, so let's talk about it after the New Year."
Through the understanding made over the past few days, Zhang Yang decided to publish it directly after considering it. He also reached a preliminary agreement with the publisher, which is the old friend publisher that has published "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and "The Godly Condor Heroes".
The two sides already have the foundation for cooperation between "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and "The Godly Condor Heroes". The other party has high royalties and is happy to make money. Even the exclusive license period is only five years. I am worried that it will anger this talented writer with unlimited potential, but I don't know that for Zhang Yang, a former online writer, five-year exclusive license is simply buying publishing and giving exclusives, and I don't take it seriously at all.
So we both felt that each other was so generous. With such a first impression, we did not lose any behavior after that, and the cooperation was naturally pleasant.
Zhang Yang has already modified the parts that need to be modified. The content after that is basically dictation and dictation, and the speed naturally increases greatly. However, in order to make it difficult to write seriously and it is difficult, he still limits his speed and occasionally asks teachers in the school to consult various knowledge points in the book.
Zhang Yang accompanied her to read the passage she had just written, and then went out together, preparing to go to a private resort to play. There was a movie in the afternoon, and it was confirmed that the relationship had been so long, and it seemed that these two actions were the first time.
Chapter completed!