Chapter 10 The old end, the new beginning

"Does it feel good?" Alien Ar stared at the screen, his voice sluggish, and his eyes turned around.

"It's so cool... nothing!" Alien B looked at A angrily, "I wouldn't have chosen this brat if I had known it. Okay, we worked hard to suck his stream of consciousness into a parallel world. Is it easy for us to work hard to kopy his stream of consciousness to a parallel world?"

"Yes, yes!" Alien C's eyes were red, "I'll do it. We forced this person's consciousness to consume our energy for nearly three months. In order to save money, we have eaten fast food for three months. Is it easy?"

A looked like a boss, waved his hand vigorously, and said, "Don't say anything you have done. I originally thought this kid could bring us some fun..."

"But there are too few beauties, too few yy, too little kung fu. This kid only pays attention to the result and not the process. In the end, he can hug and hold his left and right all at once, but it's only a woman for so long... it's too few!" B concluded.

"Although it's all the same, the difference between five minutes and Wu Shimin is too big!" Alien A used sexual life to make an accurate and vivid metaphor.

C's eyes turned and said, "I'm really unwilling to give up. Let's just forget it. I suggest that Gao Qiang should be used as the object of observation!"

Yi Meng shook his head: "Don't, this kid is not the material for carrots, no matter which parallel world it is transmitted to!"

Bing Xie smiled evilly: "Really? We don't send him to the Tianlong space or the Deer Cauldron space. Isn't there a messy space? Xiao Feng and Wei Xiaobao are with him, Ren Yingying and Huang Rong fly together..."

"What are you saying? Look at your adjective, it sounds like two homosexual couples," A curled his lips with dissatisfaction, "But you are talking about a method. Check it out, what is the situation of a family in the chaos of Gaoqiang's space?"

C arrived in front of the machine and pressed many keyboards. He nodded: "It's not a big person who is destined to be successful, a small person like them. There is not much difference in different spaces. Well, like the original space, a family of three, Gao Qiang's father, and the retired deputy director of a state-owned coal mine in Shanxi. He has no courage and no money..."

B raised his hand and said, "Stop, interfere, let Gao Qiang's father become the owner of the coal mine, and then let Gao Qiang go to college and live in a dormitory with Yang Guo, Linghu Chong, Duan Yu, Xu Zhu and Lin Pingzhi."

C scratched his head, "What should I do next? The chaotic space is completely modern, and there is no ancient martial arts at all. It is impossible to have any internal strength and true energy. Do we give this kid some discounts? In their world, there is no money, no power, and no boxing. It is basically impossible to make a name for itself. I don't want to watch myself work hard and move up a little bit, and it is not at all good."

A made a mouthful: "A woman who wants more...a beautiful woman. It's also a pleasure to look at."

B nodded: "Okay, just set it up. First interfere with the living conditions of Gaoqiang's family, so that their family can get rich quickly, and then let him and five big B-bs. Well, there are many beauties in the school, and finally he has some special abilities. Don't be too fucked, just these many words."

A and C nodded tragically: "It's not that we don't understand. It's that the world has become too fast. It's that teleports people to the ancient times when three wives and four concubines are so conservative. Let's see what novel feelings the same person can bring to us in this modern era called sexual liberation!"

Alien A, B and C determine the fate of Gao Qiang.

In the original space, he was an ordinary student. If he had no accidents, he would live an ordinary and ordinary life.

In Yitian Space, he is also an emperor, accompanying his beautiful wife Jiaer.

In a confused space, a modern world as developed as the original space, what can a strong man who has changed his life track?

In different spaces, the life of the same protagonist Gao Qiang is so happy that he is placed with high hopes by aliens. Can the life of a beautiful and beautiful woman be realized?

To know what happened later, please watch the sequel to "Reversal" which is not considered a sequel, "I Go to College"

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The semi-funny nature above can be regarded as part of the reversal record, or as an advertisement for the new book. Yes, the reason why the protagonist of the new book is "Gao Qiang", you guessed it right - Mouse said that the most annoying thing is to name the name. The protagonist of my first book was completely stolen from the protagonist of the "New Legend of Gao Yanei". Although I really don't think this name is good, but I don't have to be too serious when I use it for use. So, until now, I have written the third book "I went to Me in College", the protagonist's name is still Gao Qiang.

I wrote the reversal note yesterday, and suddenly I felt that everything had been explained and it was enough to end. I didn’t expect it to be so long. It took me a day to write from 8 am to 10 pm. There was a power outage in the middle. The more than 2,000 words I wrote were scrapped because I used the writing board mode, and I gritted my teeth and rewritten it. In addition, the jokes about writing a new book, the mouse wrote about 20,000 words for a day, dizzy!

I'm going to talk about the reversal. Most book friends met Mouse because of the reversal. While Mouse was grateful to everyone, he also felt very embarrassed. I now say that I feel very guilty and shameful about writing this kind of martial arts fan. Needless to say, it's time to click on it. If you understand what I mean, you can understand.

Shame is shame, but since the reversal is finished, as a whole book, the mouse summarizes every volume from the beginning, and when it comes to the end, it should also summarize the whole book.

Readers have sharp eyes. Most people think that the first half is good, while the second half disappoints many readers. The mouse criticizes himself: With a good start, half of success, but by the end of the book, success is still half, and not turning success into perfection and not continuing the classics is my fault.

After carefully reviewing this book, I browsed the catalog myself. The previous few volumes, and all the way to Guangmingding, there were not many critics. I still clearly remember the lively book review area after the previous reversal, after the Nine Yang True Sutra was destroyed - but this was a success. Because there were no complaints, or there were very few complaints.

In the first half of the period, except for a few mentally retarded plots, the whole body was quite successful. The protagonist spent most of his time as a child, a teenager, and also had feelings for Yang Di, as well as his previous relationship with Zhao Min and Yin Li. They were all praised.

In the second half, it starts from the top of Guangming. Criticism and daily increase.

I think about it now, I am so stupid. Why do I have to write Guangmingding? I just forget it. Why do I have to write such a long battle scene? It's okay if the battle scene is long, why do I have so many whimsical ideas? To be honest, I'll take a look now and my face is red.

After the Guangming Ting, the situation occurred was that I was not confident. When I started writing, I had already hesitated too much.

I originally planned to use Zhao Min as the highlight to reverse the decline, but I could never write it out. In the second half, the relationship between Zhao Min and the protagonist is almost a brief description, and I feel it in just a few short sentences. Although it gives people a lot of room for imagination, it is not worth the loss.

In fact, according to the first half, I should have written it in a long, modern romance-style paragraph similar to what Gao Qiang and Sister Yang felt in the ancient tomb, but unfortunately I couldn't write it out, and suddenly I lost my feeling.

This is my biggest shortcoming. Of course, there are some problems, such as the later conflict between the aphrodisiac and martial arts. I did not do a good job in the balance between the two.

But the most depressed thing about me is this love scene, which seems to be piled up blocks, and it becomes a castle in the air starting from the top of the light.

If I don’t read book reviews or subscribes, I will not be affected. Maybe I can write these down, but rats are individuals after all. Later writing about rats are actually very influenced by readers. The book review area criticizes them, but there are few suggestions. The mouse is difficult to keep his mind, and the pen tip is heavy, which makes people feel dull and unhappy. If you only look at the Great Perfect Ending, this situation should almost not happen.

Recently, I heard from the lay Buddhist that many people make trouble in his book review area, but when I read his chapters, they still wrote them very wonderfully. Alas, I blame myself again.

Of course, this is not the fault of others. I only blame myself for writing some of the previous chapters badly.

It's like two more stones in a plate of fragrant rice, which breaks your teeth. Although the rice is fragrant, it tastes different because it loses mood.

The reader is lost and I am not confident. Fortunately, the mouse still has the moral character that an author should have. He trembled and honestly explained all the situation. Although some readers said that the ending was in a hurry, the mouse thought he had explained all the lines clearly. Moreover, there was really not much to dig in terms of the plot, and the mouse no longer felt the emotional scene.

The lesson I learned from this book is: If you have any articles that are "public anger" in the future, replace them and rewrite them as soon as possible, so that others will always feel the enjoyment of beauty, and the author will also have confidence and continue to maintain his state.

Since the reversal is over, there is no need to say anything more. Mouse's new book "I went to college" is actually to make up for everyone's depression in this book. The new book is just one word: good!

In order to make everyone happy to read, although it is simple to read, there are differences in realms. I hope everyone can see it as a cool book with a higher realm.

The protagonist is even a reversal record, giving everyone a lot of affinity. The other supporting characters just put a name for Mr. Jin as a famous figure. To be honest, the story has very little to do with Mr. Jin.

But using these names is a sign of mouse’s lack of confidence, and he is afraid that the reversal will be a failure. Fortunately, all book friends are enthusiastic and put this book on the new book list last night. Mouse is here, so I can only thank you, thank you, thank you again!

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Highlights:

There are some behind-the-scenes movies and TV shows, and the mouse also has one behind-the-scenes. Yesterday's plot, Yin Li and Zhu Jiuzhen chased Zhang Wuji and never stopped. Originally, the mouse was still conceived the next paragraph, that is, Gao Qiang was heartbroken by Yin Li's current situation, and finally made Yin Li xxoo. However, this emotional scene requires thousands of words, but yesterday there was no time.

The mouse thought again, it might not be good to write like this. After hesitation, and time was too hasty, it determined Zhang Wuji's tragic fate...

The mouse ran... "I went to college" and needed your support!

The introduction is as follows—

Four years of college life have ended, but I don’t know if I went to college or college?

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To match this sentence, I gave this book title. If it were true, it was because I went to life. The scope of the book was not limited to college, otherwise there would be many highlights and I would also tell the story after leaving the school gate.

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Book friends can take the following two things to do if I make a mistake.

1. Stop updating for one day.

2. Even if you read two chapters and eight thousand words, you can guess the plot.

The first VIP book in the mouse world, "The Return of the Dead", is updated daily during the vip period.

The second VIP book "The Reversal of the Dragon Saber" has been updated every day for more than 180 days.

To gain fame through reversal notes, naturally adhere to the consistent style of writing, reversal, subvert, and unconventional...

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Many people think about the old monk Wuyazi competing with him, which one is shameless? Which one is Gu Du Qiubai and Dongfang Bubai failed in a battle?

The incident of Guan Gong fighting Qin Qiong is not a dream in his mind or a dream in online games. Benpiao Astronomy Travel provides another possibility...

What interesting things would happen if the names and backgrounds of Jin Laodi as the background are applied to college students with all the names and backgrounds of college students?

For example, Wei Xiaobao, from Yangzhou, Jiangsu Province, holds a nightclub at home, and his sister is a famous selling onion (spring flowers) for girls.

Linghu Chong, a native of Huashan, Shaanxi, grew up in a scenic spot, looked far and wide, and his mind was open since childhood - his lung capacity was amazing.

Lin Pingzhi, a native of Quanzhou, Fujian, has a gangster background. It is said that he became innocent later and changed his career to open a security company. He occasionally worked part-time to collect money and ask for payments.

Duan Yu, a native of Kunming, Yunnan, is a family of Baiyao and a descendant of the royal family. He grows white and tender in the ground, and is infatuated with flowers - he loves to grow flowers and likes to see beauties.

Yang Guo and Qin Shihuang grew up next to the Terracotta Warriors and Horses. Since childhood, they were inspired by the Terracotta Warriors and Horses that were so angry that they were disliked by foreigners, and they were angry young people since childhood.

Also, Gao Qiang, which onion is this?
Chapter completed!