It is particularly noted that it is widely circulated now, including films and TV shoots, all the second pages shall prevail. What we see in mainland China are the second pages. The following sections are the first page, which can also be considered as the original version. However, some book friends use the newspaper serialized version as the original version. I will specifically indicate below, namely the newspaper version, the first page, and the second page (everyone is familiar with), mainly comparing the first page and the second page. In addition to citing the original text, the rest of the following are my original comments. Of course, the comments are just my personal opinions and I will not impose them on anyone.

Now Mr. Jin Yong has revised the third edition and is not within the scope of this series of articles.

I would like to thank all the book friends who support "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". Now I will start comparing and declare again that the following are my personal opinions, and omissions are inevitable. I welcome all book friends to correct them in the book review area, except for personal attackers. I don't mind deleting book reviews and bans. I have always hated behaviors that harm others and are not good for myself.

Everyone still remembers that when Zhang Cuishan first met Yin Susu and was used to heal Yin Susu, the Zhouzi of the Tianying Sect thought he was going to violate Yin Susu, and he once ignored him, but he kicked the boat off. The Zhouzi shouted a few times and called an altar master of the Tianying Sect. The altar master opened the mountain and cracked the stele and hit Zhang Cuishan with a palm. This is a piece that was deleted later. By the way, it was pointed out that the Baiying Sect was used as the White Eye Sect in the first edition. The flag mark was a blood-colored bloody hand, and it was very scary.

As soon as the roar stopped, Decheng suddenly heard a loud and strange cry, and his voice was extremely terrifying: "You - you want to kill the dragon - Baimei -" Before he finished speaking, the voice suddenly stopped. Dozens of Haisha Sects inside and outside the temple could not say a word, and there was still silence around. It seemed that everyone suddenly became rigid and turned into stones, and seemed to suddenly see something terrible and unusual. They were so scared that they could no longer speak. In the silent sound, a wave suddenly heard a sound. Someone in the temple was injured and fell to the ground, and then someone said tremblingly: "It's Baimei - everyone, let's go quickly-" Before he finished speaking, the voice suddenly stopped. I thought it was the monster that scared everyone to death, and had entered the temple gate, and everyone could not even feel the idea of ​​escaping.

When reading this paragraph, it seems that Yin Tianzheng took action, not Li Tianyuan took action. Below is a fragment of Yin Susu.

Yin Susu waved to the back end and shouted, "Come here!" Zhouzi at the back end knew that he was screaming and causing trouble. He was so scared that his face was not bloody, his body trembled, and said, "Little - the villain is a heartless mistake. Girl - the girl, please spare my life!" Seeing Yin Susu's calm expression, he was even more scared. He turned to Zhang Cuishan, with a pleading look in his eyes, as if he wanted to beg him to plead for mercy. Zhang Cuishan thought that Zhouzi misunderstood that he violated Yin Susu and called Chang Jin.

Peng came to save him, but he was loyal. Why should he be afraid of being like this? He only heard Yin Susu say, "You have eyes but no ears, what's the use of eyes and ears?" The Zhouzi looked happy. He knew that Yin Susu had already spared his life after saying these two words. He bent his knees and said, "Thank you for your kindness, girl!" He took out a dagger from his inner leg, waved it beside his cheeks, cut off his ears, turned over the dagger, and stabbed it into his left eye.

Zhang Cuishan was shocked, reached out his long arm, as fast as the wind, and grabbed his dagger with his hand and said, "Miss Yin, I'll dare to say something!" Yin Susu said quietly, "Okay, do whatever you say." He said to Zhouzi, "I haven't thanked Zhang Wuxia yet!" Zhouzi saved his eyes, forgot the pain in his ears, and knelt on the board and kowtowed to Zhang Cuishan several times, then kowtowed to Yin Susu, and retreated to the back. He heard his energetic shouting at the sailor, lifting the sail and turning the rudder, as if he had escaped from death, and encountered a huge happy event.

More than an hour later, the surging tide retreated from the sea, and the boat was smooth sailing faster. After dawn, it was approaching Wangpanshan Island. Wangpanshan was in the East China Sea of ​​Qiantang River. It was a desolate island with rugged rocks and uninhabited. The two ships approached the south of the island, and were a few miles apart. Only the sound of trumpets on the island was blowing. The two people raised a large black flag and waved it. The boat gradually approached. Zhang Cuishan saw the two black flags with white edges inlaid with white edges, and thought to himself: "The black flag is the meaning of gold producing water. The Lord of Changtan said that the Lord of Xuanwu is the master of raising swords and establishing power on the island. The Northern Xuanwu, Ren Guihai, and Zishui, is the master of black. It seems that the characters in the White Eyebrow Sect are proficient in the art of changing the five elements, and are not ordinary cults of fools." As he pondered, the boat sailed closer, and the black flag was embroidered with the shape of a flying turtle.

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The next piece is a piece of Zhao Min going up the mountain and Fang Dongbai fought against Zhang Wuji. Ada's nickname is the Jade-faced Divine Sword, not the Eight-Armed Divine Sword, but A San has a name and a surname, nicknamed the Eight-Armed Divine Sword, called Yuwen Ce, and Zhao Min is called Zhao Ming in the first edition.

Everyone knows that the Jade-faced Divine Sword Fang Dongbai is the leader of the four elders of the Beggars' Sect. He is famous for his swordsmanship and is handsome and handsome. He is a famous handsome man in the martial arts world. He died of serious illness more than ten years ago. Everyone felt sorry at that time. Unexpectedly, he was still alive, but his face was very different.

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Fang Dongbai grabbed the hilt of the Yitian Sword with his left hand, walked to Zhao Ming, bowed and said, "Master, the villain is powerless, so he is willing to take the blame." Zhao Ming said coldly, "I'll tell you to cut off the arms of this boy." Fang Dongbai's face was already gone, and after hearing this, he replied, "Yes!" He waved his left hand and the Frost Blade of the Yitian Sword was everywhere, and he cut off his left arm again. When everyone saw that, they were even more surprised than seeing Wuji breaking his right arm with a wooden sword, and shouted out "Oh".

Zhang Wuji was furious and pointed at Zhao Ming and cursed, "Miss Zhao, you are so cruel. Mr. Fang has tried his best, why can you let him go?" Zhao Ming said coldly, "It was you who cut off his arm, not me who cut him off, is it you who are vicious or I who are vicious?" Zhang Wuji said, "You-you-you-you-" After saying these three words "you", his anger was blocked, and he couldn't say it anymore. Zhao Ming smiled and said, "It's my slave, and I can also worry about you." She turned her eyes to Zhang Sanfeng and said, "Today, I saw that Master Zhang of Ming Cult, let go of the Wudang Sect." He waved his left hand and said, "Let's go!" His subordinates picked up Fang Dongbai, bald A Er, Yu Wence's body, and walked out of the hall.

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Looking at the two descriptions of Yin Susu and Zhao Min, they are very similar. Yin Susu punished Zhouzi, and Zhouzi wanted to lose both ears and eyes. The original book describes Zhouzi as extremely happy! After being tortured, he was energetic and directed others to drive the boat and get sails. It can be seen how cold-blooded and cruel this woman is usually.

Zhao Min's personality looks gloomy here. Fang Dongbai is a top-notch player in the world. His right arm was cut off by Zhang Wuji with a wooden sword when competing with Zhang Wuji's sword. This is no difference between the new and old versions.

The only difference is that in the old version, after Fang Dongbai's failure, Zhao Min forced Fang Dongbai to cut off Zhang Wuji's arms. Fang Dongbai knew that he could not do it, so he had to cut off his remaining left arm. Zhao Min was not just cold-blooded, but gave people a feeling of gloomy and terrifying. This woman was cute in the future and was one of the heroines, and she might feel different from each other.

Mr. Jin Yong may have deleted these two paragraphs in order to make people feel more affection for Yin Susu and Zhao Min. After all, one is the mother of the male protagonist and the other is the female protagonist.

Below is a brief description of Wang Nangu, who has a somewhat similar personality to these two women——

It turned out that Xian Yutong killed Hu Qingniu's girl Hu Qingyang. This girl knew that he was lucky and had a constant kindness. When she died, she asked her brother to protect her beloved. Hu Qingniu's wife, the poisonous immortal king, was resentful and put a golden silkworm poison on him. Hu Qingniu remembered the oath he had made to his sister and finally saved him. Xian Yutong was really scheming. He took advantage of the care of recovering from Hu Qingniu's home and stole Wang Nangu's two pairs of golden silkworms. He then raised them according to law and made poison powder and hid them in the handle of the fan. The handle of the fan was equipped with organic sacks, one plus presses, and then forced out with internal force, which could hurt people invisibly.

The new version was modified to a Xianyutong, who stole a golden silkworm from a Miaojiang woman. After being poisoned, she was rescued by Hu Qingniu. I read the old version and found that both versions were not good, and there were logical loopholes.

In the new version, even a poisonous immortal can't do anything to the second-rate character Xianyutong, which is a bit unreal.

In the old version, Wang Nangu was able to poison Xianyutong successfully, which is more credible, but the problem is that since Hu Qingniu saved Xianyutong, did he still want to take revenge and kill him again? It’s not that he shouldn’t hate him, but that the plot is illogical. Since that’s the case, he shouldn’t have saved him at that time. Maybe I think it’s too biased.

Just like when Linghu Chong was in the Smiling and Proud Wanderer, Linghu Chong was instructed by Yue Lingshan, he still did not kill Lin Pingzhi.

I am not satisfied with the descriptions of the two versions here, and my personal opinion.

Another woman is Master Mie Jue, and she gives people the impression that she is ruthless in her heart. However, this nun claims that she will not kill innocent people - of course, it is based on her inner standards. In fact, this is a bit similar to Hong Qigong, because Hong Qigong said that he killed so many people in his life, and none of them are innocent.

However, Master Mie Jue gave people a gloomy impression and was inhumane. His views on Zhang Wuji and even the Ming Cult have always been very bad. Hong Qigong was arrogant and upright, with obvious contrasts between the front and the back.

Thinking about it carefully, the killing of Ji Xiaofu and the disciples of the Five Elements Banner of the Ming Cult is indeed cruel. Her psychological description in the book once confessed that she killed Ji Xiaofu, but she always thought that Ji Xiaofu was actually dead at the hands of the Demon Cult. This psychological activity is very interesting, but it also conforms to her personality.

When Mie Jue asked Ji Xiaofu in the first version, there was such a passage, and the second version was deleted and modified-

"Hmph, it's not just an enemy of this sect. Your master, Venerable Guhong, and the famous Kunlun sect, Youlongzi, were so angry that this great devil Yang Xiao was so angry."

Then there is Ji Xiaofu's psychological activities.

She wanted to ask about the details, but she didn't dare to say it. The Emei disciples knew that the master and Master Bo Guhong were two major disciples under the Master's Master, but they didn't know that the two of them had a very close relationship. They had a marriage agreement, but Venerable Guhong died in the middle way, and Master Miejue then cut off his hair and became a nun.

The first version of Miejue in the high tower was the following paragraph. This description was a bit redundant, so the second version was deleted, and even the first paragraph was deleted, and the unmarried relationship between Gu Hongzi and Miejue was deleted. So Miejue seemed to have become a monster without emotions. I thought it was not good, but better than the first version. After all, Miejue also had emotions, but was just a person who went to extremes. She favored her disciples, hated evil like hatred, was biased against the Ming Cult, and eventually died, a tragic figure.

"For a hundred years, there have been many storms in the martial arts world. The pair of swords have been replaced several times. Later generations only knew that the Dragon Slaying Sword is the supreme martial arts world, but the Yitian Sword can be compared with it, but no one knows how the supreme is. Guo Gong defeated the young man who died for his country, but there was no successor. Only the secret in the swords was passed down by Master Guo. She tried her best to search for the Dragon Slaying Sword, but she never succeeded. When she passed away, she passed this secret to her master Yiqing. My master was too kind and soft-hearted. She took over my ingenious sister. Although she was so tired that the Dragon Slaying Sword was not found, even the Yitian Sword of my sect stolen by my sister and presented it to the court. My master died of hatred and ordered me to find the Dragon Slaying Sword and regain the Yitian Sword." Zhou Zhiruo said, "Ah, it turns out that I have such a master."

Master Mie Jue's face suddenly shrouded a sense of evil spirit, and he said, "You call her master master such a traitor who deceives Master Mie Zu, do you also call her master master?" Zhou Zhiruo lowered his head and did not dare to say anything. Master Mie Jue said, "Later, this traitor was finally found for me. This person is not upright in his mind and cannot learn martial arts. Hehe, the master finally fulfilled the will of your master and cleaned the portal." Zhou Zhiruo said in surprise: "Clean the portal?" A proud and cruel look flashed across Master Mie Jue's face, and said proudly: "Yes, at the foot of Yuelu Mountain in Changsha, I chased the traitor.

I used a move "non-flower, non-smoke" to penetrate her heart. This move "non-flower, non-smoke" was what she taught me before, and kept ridiculing me for making something wrong, saying that I would never learn it. That night, I could have taken her life within 200 moves to fight the sword under the moon in Yuelu Mountain, but I insisted on using this move "non-flower, non-smoke" to kill her, and hehe, that was more than 20 years ago." Zhou Zhiruo could not help but shivered when she heard this. For some reason, she felt a little sympathy and compassion for the master who betrayed this sect.

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The Golden Lion King who has been written in the next chapter will be updated at 8 o'clock tomorrow

The next day update of the third chapter of Zhang Wuji, who is different from each other.

Then a few days are the fourth chapter of the lost Jade-faced Fire Monkey

Chapter 5 The deleted villain is really a role

Chapter 6 The Evil Hu Qingniu

Chapter 7 Dissatisfied Ending

Each chapter is just an overview, mixed with some other details.

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