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Forced to reply to book friends on the last day

□It seems that the author has not yet figured out why his work is not very popular! No matter who the little character Gao Qiang becomes, whether it is Duke Tang Tais of the blood clan or the little Taoist boy on Wudang Mountain, the earthy taste in his bones can never be changed. Although this is very real, most of the country bumpkins from the loess slopes in China are indeed of this kind, but most readers want to get a sense of pleasure in substituting the characters in the story when watching movies or YY novels. Even if Gao Qiang hugs the little character Gao Qiang is rich and powerful, he still has a sense of inferiority. The more he reads, the more boring he feels, let alone substituting the characters....

Reply: You can not read it, and in addition, you can make a storytelling, don’t comment on people, ban people from talking...

Don’t look down on what you call a “landbuster”. Your family counts several generations above, which is what you call a “landbuster”. Can people who think they are superior to others really read books with a normal attitude?

Don't be self-righteous. You can be honest and say that the Duke of the Vampire is not popular, and this book is now in hot air. I am not trying to show off anything, but to use it to illustrate that your judgment is not accurate.

To put it, I hate people like Guo Fu who are born proud...

□Don’t be influenced by some people (why those without quality say you don’t have to pay attention to them. The important thing is that you have so many loyal readers who like your works are by your side to support you!) OK, I won’t say much about other things, I will come every day. I vote one day to support Dada. Support updates (no-educated people go there)

Reply: It’s not that he has no culture... it’s that he is too proud.

Spicy hot pot

□If this is Zhao MM, it would be another source of evil when they see each other using fake names in the end! They don’t know each other and find someone who belongs to the other party’s fake name. In the end, they will only find him if he hurts him. HAPPY.END!! It’s better to see how to write it!! If you continue to do this, be careful to watch the other party chase others, haha! ~ I wonder if you guessed correctly!!!

Reply: There is a little vague meaning in my mind, but I dare not take it in the end. If I really write this way, I am afraid that readers will not be able to stand it... But maybe I will write this way too.

□Is the author's mind soaked? The little beauty that appeared in these chapters. Don't tell me you don't know who he is - who else can be so arrogant in the Ruyang Palace besides Zhao Min? The protagonist who is trying to make seems to be unaware of him and not knowing... It's too fake.

Reply: Is she arrogant? Look carefully, at most, she is considered savage, and she is arrogant and has to find another object to impose it... In the next few chapters, she sees what arrogance means. Bazhang

□I used to think that the number of words was very small, but now I specially waited for the update at twelve o'clock. I came up and saw it. It took me more than two minutes to finish reading it. I was depressed, a feeling of not being full... a feeling of not being full... a feeling of not being full... a feeling of not being full... a feeling of not being full... a feeling of not being full... a feeling of not being full... a... a... a... a... a... a... a... a...

Reply: I'm hungry, you'll be full soon. I won't move

□Master Mie Jue said again: "The devil sneered and said: 'The Yitian Sword is so famous! In my eyes, it is like scrap copper and iron!' He threw the Yitian Sword underground and left. Your master picked up the sword and wanted to go back to the mountain to hand it back to me. But he was arrogant and the more he thought about it, he became sadder. He only took three days to get sick on the way and couldn't get up. The Yitian Sword was also taken to the local government and presented it to the court. Who is the evil devil who is the demon sect who is angry with your master Gu Hongzi?" Zhou Zhiruo said: "No... I don't know who it is?" This Yitian Sword was later given to the King of Ruyang by the Emperor of the Tartars, and I went to the Prince Ruyang Palace to take it back. This time, unfortunately he was accidentally trapped and the sword fell into the hands of the Demon Cult." (Ren Huixiang, the 27th Hundred-foot Tower)

Reply: Not bad. Invincible in the world

□ Canary’s chapter is well written, and it has laid some groundwork for the subsequent plot. It can be said that from then on, this book has slowly begun to break the constraints of the original framework. How to develop below is no longer predictable, and it depends entirely on the author’s grasp. Come on! Support the second vote.

Reply: Thank you for your support, just encouragement...=YYY=

□Don’t be influenced by some people. These two chapters are the best written so far. The meeting with Zhao Min is arranged very distinctive, haha. But I don’t want Zhao Min to fall in love with Gao Qiang. Love is not that easy. It’s just a 78-year-old child... Zhao Min should like a man like Zhang Wuji…

Reply: It’s hard to say, it’s hard to say, the thing about feelings is the hardest to say. 520123123

□I didn't want to say that I saw that the author was preparing to let Gao Qiang practice the Dugu Nine Swords and had to say that. Although there were countless bugs in Master Jin's works, none of them affected the overall situation. Only the Dugu Nine Swords in "The Smiling and Proud Wanderer" had the most serious bug. The plot of the book was based on the huge bug of Dugu Nine Swords, otherwise it would not be true. Many experts have discussed this bug and are well known, so I will not repeat it again. I feel that the "Dugu Nine Swords" used by the King of Yumeng Knife in "The Deer and the Cauldron" is more reasonable. I hope Xiaoxiao Wanderer Rats will consider it. In fact, Gao Qiang can practice the Nine Yin well without practicing other martial arts at all.

Reply: I never planned to let him practice the Nine Swords of Dugu. The Sunflower Book will appear in this book, and the Nine Swords of Lonely will no longer appear. Controversial figures

□The more I write, the harder it is. This story is just right, but the technique is not good, so it doesn’t seem like that! The author should practice writing again! Take a look at the good works of the same type and learn it!

Reply: Good works in the same type? Which books are you referring to? I think it is better to go back and review Mr. Jin Yong's works as authentic. Swords and Rivers

□Applicant role: Wang Zhan, 20-23 years old, is cold and fierce, unruly, despised etiquette, is dull, is loyal and righteous, family martial arts, Hunyuan Qigong, practices iron cloth shirts horizontally, opens a monument, chops and legs, thirty-six-way capture hands, weapons, goose feather steel knife, good at riding shooting, iron-body strong bow, iron-studded arrow, seven-star pearl skills, enters the escort bureau as an escort, goes north to the escort, suffers wars and loses the escort, and the escorts are all lost. Later, he enters the horse thief, based on his experience in the battle field, combines his family martial arts to create nine blood-killing styles, his moves are simple and vicious, he goes away but never returns, and is extremely brave. When he encounters a large group of Mongolian soldiers, he kills the people, and is outnumbered, and is captured with scrupulous strength. King Runan is grateful for his bravery, and he exchanges the people for slaves, and receives the protagonist's great kindness and regards him as the main character. The protagonist is loyal, righteous and brave, treats him with friends.

Reply: Such a powerful character should be the protagonist... Reject it, I know my level and can't write such a character. Read and taste tea and Xiaoyaoke

The plot should be based on the protagonist as the clue and the supporting role as the driving force. For example, Zhang Wuji studied medicine and was forced by Xuanming's god palm. When he went to Kunlun, he was entrusted by Ji Xiaofu, he studied Jiuyang and was chased by Zhu Changling. Being the leader was coincidentally when the six major sects were besieged by Guangmingding. Otherwise, he would have no way to do martial arts. Such a plot would appear natural. Most of the previous plots were driven by the protagonist's subjective behavior, which would be reluctant. Moreover, the protagonist was smart and the other was a problem of his personality serving the plot...
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