50, beating like a painting
Candy was very coaxing this night. He was tired from crying during the day and felt sad for Tang Xiaohei and Tang Xiaohua in the evening, so the little guy fell asleep quickly.
Tang Shuang can finally come to the study. Tonight, "The Romance of Dragon and Snake" will begin its official serialization. After logging into the author area, Li Haonan's short posts pop up one after another. The time span is from 9 o'clock in the morning to two minutes ago, a full 20
Multiple.
Tang Shuang took a quick look, and they all asked when the manuscript would be uploaded. If divided by time period, the contents in the morning, afternoon and evening were very different, which directly reflected the change in editor Li's mentality and how painful he was.
This day~
In the morning, he happily said that the readers were looking forward to it and the public sentiment was high. He told Tang Shuang to upload a few more chapters today to make a good start.
In the afternoon, Tang Shuang didn't reply. He felt vaguely bad and stopped asking about how many chapters to upload. Instead, he said it would be good to start a chapter.
In the evening, editor Li was already worrying about gains and losses, and asked pitifully, "Are you going to let the readers go? If you do, he, the editor, will be laid off!"
Tang Shuang opened the folder. He had taken the time to code ten chapters in the past few days, about 30,000 words. He originally wanted to upload three chapters, but the first three chapters had too much introductory content and the plot was relatively bland. He was worried about disappointing readers, so he decided to upload more.
One chapter, contribute the fourth chapter "Hitting people with strength is like hanging a picture, Kung Fu is deep in the marrow and you are not afraid of guns".
Chapter 4 contains the description of actual combat for the first time. Dynasty and Tang Zichen encountered an international killer hired by the CIA. Tang Zichen was one on three, using national martial arts against firearms, and won completely! After this chapter is released, readers can feel relieved.
First, the writing style of "The Romance of Dragon and Snake" is completely different from that of "Hero". There is no Spring and Autumn writing style, the plot is passionate and compact, the martial arts plot is very detailed in every move, and various martial arts moves emerge in endlessly.
For example, Tang Zichen defeated a wolf weighing nearly 200 kilograms with one move of "moving, blocking and beating", and disabled a violent bear weighing more than 200 kilograms with one move of "turning palm". When fighting the divine fox, he used snakes to pull weeds and snakes to swing around.
The monkey steals the peach, and the dragon raises its head.
The second is to provide readers with an answer to how Chinese martial arts and firearms compete. Will a person who has practiced Chinese martial arts for many years be easily killed by a gun?
The Divine Fox's marksmanship was superb and he shot at close range. Only one shot was hit in three shots. Moreover, Tang Zichen shrugged his shoulders and used the strength of his muscles to squeeze out the bullet easily, and the bleeding stopped.
It is equivalent to ordinary people peeling fruit and breaking the skin.
The impact of Dragon Snake in another world is shocking. Its biggest highlight lies in its description of Chinese martial arts and its passionate battles.
But at the same time, its shortcomings are also obvious. All plots involving life are relatively blunt, the characters are not three-dimensional and full, and they lack the flavor of life.
For example, the description of the relationship between Wang Dynasty and Tang Zichen makes people feel embarrassed.
For example, in the first three chapters, when Tang Zichen and Wang Chao met for the first time, the former was constantly called "little fool" and "silly boy".
For example, the eldest lady of the consortium, Chen Bin, "smoking lightly from a bottle of Wong Lo Kat herbal tea" appeared in a funny scene, and the supporting actor Chen Xin had a strange description of "a ferocious face, vicious and vicious, worthy of being a returnee who returned from studying abroad."
, Liao Junhua said childishly, "If this matter can't be solved within five minutes, the traffic police captain here should stop doing it."
Therefore, Tang Shuang will continue to extract the essence and discard the dross in subsequent writing.
After Tang Shuang uploaded these four chapters, he replied to Li Haonan, asking him to put his uneasy heart back and don't worry. Since Tang Shuang promised, he would definitely do it. At the same time, Tang Shuang left his mobile phone number.
Li Haonan.
Within a minute, Tang Shuang's cell phone rang. Looking at the caller ID, it was Li Haonan.
Li Haonan heard Tang Shuang's voice and asked without daring to confirm, "Teacher Tang?"
The voice was too young, not like Tang Sanjian. He had seen photos of Tang Sanjian. A man in his 50s could not have such a tender voice.
After Tang Shuang explained it, Li Haonan finally understood. No wonder the painting style of "Hero" suddenly changed and was completely different from the style of works such as "Impermanent Sword". At that time, he also guessed that Teacher Tang had accumulated a lot and gained enlightenment.
It turned out that it was not written by the same person at all. Teacher Tang took a back seat and inherited his father's legacy. The young writer was better than the old. This made Li Haonan even more happy. A young author obviously has more prospects, and he will have more in common with him and be better.
deal with.
The text of "The Romance of Dragon and Snake" has been updated, and book fans in Lincheng Library started discussing it immediately.
Sure enough, as Tang Shuang expected, after reading the battle plot in Chapter 4, everyone can finally put their hearts back in their stomachs. The author finally did not use the Spring and Autumn style of writing. The battle is not only full of positive descriptions, but also very exciting, with a great visual sense.
It is strong and the emotions are mobilized well. The readers can't help but feel excited while reading.
"Before, I was worried that the museum owner wouldn't be able to write battles. I didn't expect that Tang Zichen would be so sophisticated. Tang Zichen killed three international mercenaries when he came on stage. It was very satisfying to watch."
"I counted and Tang Zichen used Tai Chi, Bagua and Xingyi in total during the battle. He used six moves. One of them was to pursue and one to dodge. So in fact, there were only four attack moves. Four moves killed three.
Man, [Shocked face] Killing one person in ten steps is not as efficient as this. It’s so terrifying, and it makes people completely believe it. The sense of reality is too strong.”
"The gun is useless! I hit the shoulder and it's fine after shaking. It's fine. It's fine. It's fine. [I can't believe it]."
"Ask those experts who practice martial arts. A real battle is about deciding the outcome in an instant. There won't be any battles that last for hours, or even for three days and three nights. This is magic, not a real battle."
"The levels of kung fu seem to have come out, divided into Ming Jin, Dark Jin and Hua Jin. The heroine has reached the highest level. It is very difficult for the dynasty to chase her, but I like it, haha, I just like this kind of difficult operation.
There is a sense of conquest [wretched face].”
"The so-called national martial arts is the combination of martial arts from various schools, such as Xingyi, Tai Chi, Bagua, Tongbei, Mantis, Baji, kick kick, Hongquan, iron wire, split hanging, kick kick, wrestling and many others.
Martial arts, unified name. This is to unify the world and become the leader of the martial arts alliance!"
"Guoshu is a good word! Put aside sectarian opinions and don't be self-conscious. This is the only way to carry forward Chinese martial arts."
""The Romance of Dragon and Snake" should not be considered martial arts. Maybe we can create a new category and call it Chinese martial arts!"
"The realism of the battle plot is much better than that of martial arts. There is no flying around, no awesome and unpredictable moves, and all the moves used are those in reality, such as moving, blocking and beating, and monkeys stealing peaches.
, everyone has heard it more or less, but it is extremely powerful when used in battle!"
"Upstairs, you've heard of monkeys stealing peaches. Almost everyone has used it when they were young."
"You won't find vampire movies scary when you watch them, but watching Liao Zhai is like a childhood nightmare that has haunted me for decades. In the same way, it is precisely because we have all heard of these moves in Dragon and Snake that they seem extremely real.
, and extremely passionate.”
"I think it's very inconsistent for a goddess like Tang Zichen to use such a vulgar move as a monkey stealing peaches?"
Chapter completed!