Inventory of this volume
This volume is over, let’s continue to learn from the big guys and take stock.
First of all, Danke wants to say that after reading everyone’s chapters, Danke said that some friends said that this section is very intellectually powerful - but Danke has tried hard to remain reasonable.
Danke would like to explain here. Yun Song is not a particularly powerful, smart, or scheming person. Danke introduced this at the beginning. He is just an ordinary person who didn’t even understand it in school. Before he traveled through time, he
His dream is to have a pie in the sky, a virtuous daughter-in-law, his parents will be healthy, and he can live a smooth life as a small citizen.
There is a saying that goes well, most of the protagonists written by the author are himself. Danke is not a smart person, so he cannot write a protagonist who is particularly smart and calculating.
So if you see Yunsong doing stupid things later, it means he is stupid...
Then let’s talk about this volume - some people may have read this volume and said that there are so many reversals, and you just do reversals for the sake of reversals, and you are looking for compensation in the end.
But that's not the case.
This volume is very complete in the outline. This book indeed once had a relatively complete outline.
The title of the volume is "May you travel through mountains and rivers and still feel that the world is worth it." This means that Yunsong has to see that people's hearts are sinister, and that some people will take advantage of those who love them, and some people will harm their relatives and friends for power.
Friends.
This result is not a temporary fix by Danke. After the protagonist meets Gongsun and his party, Danke is laying the groundwork for the final result.
The overall background of this volume is as follows: Xu Fu and Tian Fang discovered a meteorite dragon vein in the local mountains. Yu Jinbao was still a top soldier at that time. He was hired by Xu Fu as a guide and bodyguard. Later Xu Fu discovered the meteorite dragon vein. This
A meteor dragon vein is useless to him, but it is very useful to Yu Jinbao.
Yu Jinbao got some luck from the Dragon Vein and his luck improved step by step. At the same time, he and Tian Fang fell in love. Lu Jingtian learned about this, and Lu Jingtian took the opportunity to attack Tian Fang and seize the Dragon Vein. He sent Gongsun Wufeng to lead people to kill Yu Jinbao.
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As a result, the Li family bet on Yu Jinbao. They killed Gongsun Wufeng and allowed the seriously injured Yu Jinbao to transfer his soul to Gongsun Wufeng.
Later, Yu Jinbao began to plot revenge, but Lu Jingtian hid the meteorite dragon vein. He had great luck, so Yu Jinbao had nothing to do with him.
Li was dissatisfied with this and chose to bet on Jin Qingshan. Li Teng was a spy who stayed with Yu Jinbao.
Jin Qingshan knew everything Yu Jinbao did, but he stood still and did not remind Lu Jingtian that he had an agreement with the Li family. As Da Luer understood, he also wanted to be the commander-in-chief.
Yu Jinbao thought he was the man behind the scenes. He first instigated the Second Division to rebel, and then used the Lu family sisters on their way back to Guizhou to kill the rising stars of several famous sects in Guizhou, disrupting the spiritual world in Guizhou. Such a step
Step forward to cut off Lu Jingtian’s gang members.
Many readers hate Da Lu'er, but as Da Lu'er said at the end, "She went to a big city to study and she was stupid." She thought that life was the flowers before and under the moon, romance and snow in the love novels she had read. In fact, it was a human being.
eat human……
However, the completeness of this volume is not very good. For example, the wealthy beggar family that was originally scheduled to come forward did not show up. Originally, I wanted to write that Yu Jinbao also contacted the wealthy beggar family. The beggar family owed him and Yun Song some favors.
, originally I wanted to write a plot, which was to describe the internal strife between the various sects in the city. Behind this internal strife, there was a wealthy family causing trouble. It was Yu Jinbao who asked the wealthy family to help mess up the mess.
But as Danke continued to write, I realized it was too late. This volume dragged on for too long, and to be honest, there were not many readers, and even fewer people liked to read it. Most people just gave Danke a chance to catch up on it.
So as Eggshell wrote, I gradually became discouraged.
Originally, all of this had to be laid out and advanced step by step. Danke wanted to work hard to write a plot in which a group of people have their own plans, use each other, and scheme against each other.
For example, Gongsun, who seemed to have no ability along the way, and Jin Qingshan, who later found out that he had no ability after meeting each other. They all seemed to have false reputations. Yun Song thought that he was the most powerful, but in fact, they all had their own agenda and were scheming against him.
Interests.
For another example, when writing about the ghost village, Danke wanted to express it more clearly, write about Gongsun's lament, and write about the strangeness of the ghosts in the village.
The ghost village was originally a branch of his own. It was a very unique existence. This was the place he had originally prepared to use to deal with Sima Yulong and other rising stars. However, when they encountered ghosts fighting against the wall, he had the opportunity to kill Sima Yulong first, and Yun
Song's ability was so weird that he almost destroyed the ghost village.
But Eggshell still decided not to expose the thread. The reason is very simple. If there are such clues, others will see it - everyone is smarter than me. They can definitely see that Gongsun had a problem at that time, and even see the biggest problem in this volume.
An answer to the mystery, Gongsun’s true identity.
When the ghost village appeared, this volume was still in its early stages. Once all these clues were found, it would be meaningless to write about it later - everyone knew who the boss was, and it would be meaningless to bury the clues in the plot. At that time, everyone would
Feeling: It’s so obvious and such a big anomaly that a character didn’t notice it? Isn’t this mental retardation?
In short, thank you all for following up to this point, thank you all for your support, Danke will continue to work hard, and then we will move on to the next volume.
Chapter completed!