Putting the manuscript in front of Mr. Ba, Li Heng had no reason to be interested in his mind.
Can you lose your core?
Starting from Chapter 8, some scenes about gender are described very boldly. He had considered deleting these clips before, but after careful consideration, he decided to keep them.
How to say it?
It feels like without these clips, this "White Deer Plain" is not complete and cannot be regarded as the most peak literary work.
But it's only 88 years now, and many things are affected by the times and the general environment. He couldn't grasp the degree of this for a while, so he thought about letting the respected old man take a look.
Mr. Ba put on his reading glasses, took the manuscript and read it. Without any rendering, he was immersed in the world of the book.
For a moment, whether it was Li Heng, Editor-in-Chief Liao and Li Xiaolin, after a while, they did not dare to disturb each other and got up and went to the yard outside.
As soon as he arrived at the courtyard, Editor-in-Chief Liao patted his shoulder and said happily: "Your opening this time is amazing, and it caused a huge sensation in the industry."
Li Heng has read the news newspapers, but he understands that the highlight is still behind. Now, influential literary celebrities, literary critics and authoritative media magazines have not made public comments on "Bai Luyuan". It is estimated that they are all waiting for the follow-up of this novel.
After all, a 500,000-word novel has only published 70,000 words. Although there are already signs of signs, what if it collapses later?
Then it’s too early to draw a conclusion, wouldn’t you slap yourself in the face later?
Therefore, the most lively people shouting now are the readers who support Li Heng and some small media. As for those who have weight, they are waiting for an opportunity and waiting for the follow-up.
Seeing Li Heng just laughing, Editor-in-Chief Liao sighed: "The journal of Harvest sold nearly 3.5 million copies in February, once again surpassing People's Literature to top the top in China.
A large part of this is due to you and "White Deer Plain". When I got the statistics, I was not as calm as you, and I was so excited for a long time."
Li Xiaolin next to him laughed and joked, "Brother Liao, you must flatter your junior brother. If you neglect him one day, you might run away."
Editor-in-chief Liao smiled, looked at Li Heng, and continued, "To be honest, we have had such concerns before.
But now I have become more transparent. As long as Bai Luyuan can maintain quality in the future, I am content with such a literary work published in the magazine "Harvest".
Editor-in-chief Liao's potential meaning is very obvious: for public or private, he certainly hopes that Li Heng will stay in Harvest magazine forever, but he also respects Li Heng's personal choices very much.
After chatting about "White Deer Plain", Editor Liao talked about "Cultural Journey" again. He took out a bill of exchange from his briefcase and handed it to Li Heng: "As of the end of March, "Cultural Journey" sold a total of 3456,013 copies, which is the second batch of settlement money."
The first batch was 2 million copies, with a royalty of 8%, and the amount was settled before the New Year.
The second batch refers to the 1456013 volumes that follow.
Regarding money, Li Heng always talked about it. He focused on a brother who settled the accounts clearly and was never vague. He immediately did not make much politeness and took the bill of exchange very quickly.
I looked down and saw that the amount displayed on the bill of exchange was 466,000 yuan.
Obviously, Harvest magazine gave him a few hundred more yuan and collected an integer for him.
640,000 plus 466,000, and a movie "Cultural Journey" helped him earn 1.106 million yuan.
Make him a millionaire directly.
I had a bank deposit of 130,000 yuan earlier.
Mouth! It actually exceeded 1.2 million!
It reached a considerable 1.236 million yuan!
This is a huge sum of money, and Li Heng was a little excited for a while, which an ordinary family could not earn in their lifetimes.
Even though I had tens of millions of bank deposits in my previous life, I was inexplicably excited to think that I became a millionaire at this age!
This sense of accomplishment and security is not comparable to that of later generations.
The three of them were drinking tea in the courtyard and chatting for a while. Later, Li Xiaolin got up and went to cook lunch.
As soon as the person left, Editor Liao pondered for a while and asked him: "Did Zhaoyi go to Bailuyuan to find you?"
Li Heng shook his head: "No."
Then he asked, "What? Is there any news about her? Or is she coming to you?"
Editor-in-chief Liao said: "I haven't had it in the past month. It's just that her mother asked me about you some time ago, and I'll get angry with you."
"oh?"
Li Heng was surprised, "What did her mother ask me?"
Editor-in-chief Liao looked at him and sighed and said, "What else can I do? I want to ask about your personal situation, and I want to see if it is possible for you and Zhaoyi?"
As a mother, Zhaoyi has not yet married yet. I can understand her anxiety and worries. But junior brother, don’t worry, she is a more reasonable person and will not cause trouble for you.”
Hearing this, Li Heng was heartbroken.
In other words, he has never been very concerned about this matter. Although he has not had much close contact with Huang Zhaoyi, he can still make a preliminary judgment from his previous correspondence that the other party is open and not going to be dirty.
From morning to noon, and then to afternoon, Li Heng stayed at the teacher's house and chatted with his two senior brothers and sisters Hu Tianhai.
Mr. Ba was fascinated by reading books and didn't care about his life or death throughout the whole process. He didn't stop until the evening. This was because he was tired of looking at it and needed to rest.
Seeing this, Li Heng, Editor-in-Chief Liao and Li Xiaolin stopped communicating and looked over together.
Especially editor Liao, who is more concerned about the subsequent quality of this work than Li Heng, and he is looking forward to asking: "Teacher,
How about it?
This problem made Li Heng very nervous.
In short, this "White Deer Plain" is still the original "White Deer Plain", but it is not the same "White Deer Plain".
After all, he added 30% of the content based on his two-life experience, striving to make the original work more profound and thick.
Mr. Ba looked at Editor Liao and his daughter. Finally, his eyes stopped on Li Heng. After a long period of calm, his face finally changed. He slowly sank the manuscript and said:
"Okay! This is a book that can be used as a pillow when lying in a coffin after death."
A "good" or a sentence, the evaluation is powerful and powerful, and it is not bad!
What's more, this statement comes from the mouth of Mr. Ba, a master of literary world, which shows its value.
Editor-in-chief Liao stood up with a whizz, then sat down again, holding a cup of strong tea in his hand, extremely happy.
Li Xiaolin was also moved. She understood how her father was alone. She could make such a judgment and undoubtedly liked this literary work very much.
The one who is most excited is Li Heng, and his heart finally fell into the ground. When he was writing, he felt that the new part was particularly good, and many places had the effect of painting dragons and sunshine.
But the old saying goes well, those in the authorities are confused, and those onlookers are clear!
No matter how good your senses are, you will have no eggs. It is easy to have thinking errors. If everyone else highly recognizes your goodness, that is really good!
Mr. Ba asked: "This subject is good and can easily resonate. How did you think of writing this subject at that time?"
Everyone present paid more attention to this issue, and their eyesight was accumulated on his face.
Li Heng replied without blushing, "I didn't think about it either. I just read too much literature and naturally had this idea."
Editor-in-chief Liao thoughtfully and asked, "The documents that Zhao Jing gave you."
Li Heng nodded: "The initial inspiration did come from that batch of materials, which recorded the customs and cultures in Guanzhong and northern Shaanxi in detail, which gave me great inspiration."
Upon hearing this, Mr. Ba said, "Those who have ambition have achieved success. You are very good. You are much better than when I was young."
Editor-in-chief Liao and Li Xiaolin looked at each other and remained silent.
Li Heng smiled embarrassedly, "Thank you, teacher."
Then he asked the most concerned question: "Teacher, look at some of the contents in it, do you want to make modifications?"
Some words were understood as soon as you heard them, and Mr. Ba asked, "Are you referring to this aspect of Xiao'e's description of lust?"
Li Heng said it was right.
Mr. Ba fell into deep thought. After a while, he slowly waved his hand: "It's all the essence, so it's not suitable to move for the time being."
"Yeah, good!" Li Heng responded happily.
With his support, he doesn't have to be afraid of anything, just write, and write hard.
Mr. Ba took a sip of tea, covered the lid, and asked, "When will I finish writing?"
Li Heng had a long plan for this: "If it's fast, this semester will be slower than August."
Mr. Ba nodded, "Put it on my manuscript first, and after reading it, you, Miss Xiaolin, will send it to you."
Li Heng said again, saying that there is no hurry.
After dinner, Mr. Ba took Li Heng and Editor-in-Chief Liao for a walk on the main road outside, talked about some things in the literary world today, and told Li Heng:
"You have genius, you should use your best and cherish it. If you have something outside the field, you don't have to worry about it."
"Thank you, teacher, thank you, senior brother." Li Heng felt warm in his heart when he heard it.
Once again, I deeply felt that grandma is a bear! It’s good to have a backer, and the whole world can be visited.
At 7 o'clock in the evening, Mr. Ba, who had finished his walk, continued to read "White Deer Plain".
Seeing that it was getting late, Li Heng also offered to say goodbye, "Miss Xiaolin, then I'll go back first and see you and the teacher later."
Li Xiaolin enthusiastically persuaded him to stay: "It's so late, it's almost dark, why don't you spend the night here today and leave tomorrow."
Li Heng shook his head, "Tomorrow Monday, I will rush back to class for the full class. The course has been delayed too much, so I have to make up for it."
After shirking, seeing that he had decided, Li Xiaolin had to give up and finally said to Editor Liao: "Brother Liao,
You drive him to see him off.”
Editor-in-chief Liao had this idea long ago. After leaving the courtyard gate, he got on the van with Li Heng and rushed towards Yangpu.
The two of them talked and talked along the way, and they arrived in Lushan Village without realizing it.
Get off the bus at the entrance of the alley, Li Heng leaned on the window and asked, "Senior brother, do you want to go to my house for a while?"
Editor Liao lit a cigarette, took a few puffs and said, "Next time, it's a little late today."
"Okay, then you drive slowly on the road and be careful."
Both of them are old acquaintances, and there are not so many twists and turns. Li Heng immediately retreated aside and watched the van leave before walking into the alley.
"Huh? Are you not at home?"
When he arrived at the end of the alley, Li Heng found that the three surrounding buildings were pitch black, and the bright lights and fireworks of the past made him very uncomfortable.
Not giving up, he tried to shout loudly.
He called Teacher Yu, Huo Xi, and Zhou Shiwei, but there was no response. Wherever he saw, it was deserted.
Standing in the middle of the alley for a long time, Li Heng took out the key and opened the door and entered the house.
The moment he entered the house, he didn't know if it was an illusion. He always felt that his family would probably not be able to see Teacher Yu for a long time.
In fact, his premonition was right. In the next month, Yu Shuheng not only did not come to his house, but even rarely came back to Lushan Village.
Every time sunset, the building No. 25 opposite is lonely, with doors and windows closed, making it look alone in the setting sun.
The person disappeared and the sound of the ocarina disappeared, which made him very uncomfortable.
Fortunately, the doors of the building No. 27 next door often open, but whether it is Zhou Shihe or Mai Xu, they come to his house much less than before, and they basically don’t spend the night at his house.
However, Li Heng, who has been busy writing, has no time to think deeply, and is so busy that he can't extricate himself from his writing world.
I have lost many connections with the outside world, but the writing results I have received are gratifying.
In this month, in addition to class, he practiced behind closed doors and pushed the progress of "White Deer Plain" to 35
Chapter, and the quality is better than the chapter.
Therefore, Mr. Ba praised him endlessly and privately told his daughter and Editor Liao: He was born to be a product of the rice bowl of pen.
"Li Heng, your letter.
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On May 12th, today is Thursday. After the seventh class, Liu Yue walked in from outside, holding a stack of letters in her hand.
Li Heng asked casually: "Where is it?"
"You can read it yourself, there are several letters." Liu Yue said, handing him 6 letters at once, which scared him.
After a rough passage, except for Song Haoxin as he expected, the other five letters came in a rather strange way.
For example, Yang Yingwen's.
For example, Chen Lijun, who has never been contacted.
For example, the two sisters Li Wang and Li Xi.
While he was thinking about the envelope, Liu Yue tore off a note and said: I am going abroad soon. Is it still effective if you promised to have dinner with me two months ago?
Li Heng verified for a while, put away the 6 letters, and wrote back: When will he leave?
Liu Yuemei wrote: Everyone in the class knows it, haven’t you heard of it?
Li Heng replied: Sorry, I have been busy lately.
Thinking of the huge influence that "Bai Luyuan" has had in the newspapers these days, Liu Yue was relieved and didn't hold on to it, and wrote: I'll leave the morning after tomorrow, and today is the last time I will send you a letter.
Li Heng turned his head and looked at him, and replied sincerely: Thank you.
After hesitating for a moment, he asked: When do you have time?
Liu Yue wrote: How about tomorrow night?
Li Heng asked: Tonight? Is it OK tomorrow afternoon? There are only 2 classes tomorrow afternoon.
Liu Yue wrote: I have no time in the afternoon, and my family wants to practice it for me. My relatives and friends are there and I can’t leave.
Li Heng looked straight at her and then wrote back a few seconds later: Yes.
Liu Yue was so energetic that I would pick you up at the school gate at around 6 pm tomorrow.
Li Heng replied: OK.
Chapter completed!