After meticuling it twice, he added 20% of his own content in the first chapter alone, making the opening look more intense, more infectious, more mysterious and more emotional.
At this moment, he felt a little happy. Fortunately, he worked as a civil servant for seven years in his previous life, and had a lot of time. He had read countless books and accumulated a lot of knowledge.
Fortunately, he loved reading for both lives and had a sense of life and death, and had the ability and opportunity to have surgery on this famous ritual.
After resting for a while, he was a little thirsty and reached out to hold the cup to drink tea. He found that he didn't even have a water cup.
He wanted to move and wanted to drink water.
But the next second he held down this idea because he knew that writing was the most rare, once he left his seat,
It will take a long time to brew.
Exhaust two turbid breaths, Li Heng began to refine the third time, if the previous "Living" and "Cultural Journey" were mentioned above
It is his work of earning fame and money. This novel has great ambitions. In addition to money and reputation, he also needs to earn honors.
Not bad, it's honor!
Therefore, he planned to devote unprecedented energy to writing this famous book, polishing his new content, striving to excel, and striving to go to a higher level on the basis of the original book.
It took more than 13,000 words, and the third revision took Li Heng more than 3 hours to complete it. After reading it, he read it all from beginning to end. It felt that the effect was pretty good and he was very satisfied.
"Um...!"
Li Heng stretched his hands straight and yawned. He felt comfortable all over, but he was so hungry that his stomach was rumbling!
I didn't feel it during the writing process, but as soon as I stopped, he couldn't stand it anymore, and a huge feeling of hunger hit his heart in an instant.
Look at the time, grandma, it's 7:49.
This 12-hour sitting has lasted for more than 12 hours!
That's outrageous!
He felt that he was an iron man.
He took the trick and simply packed up the paper and pen. He was too lazy to organize the manuscript, so he hurriedly opened the door and rushed out.
At this time, Yu Shuheng and Zhou Shihe were watching TV on the sofa, silently TV, the kind that didn't make any sound.
Hearing the movement, the two women turned their heads and looked at him, Li Heng had no time to say hello, and ran straight towards the bathroom.
With a "bang", the bathroom door closed!
The two women looked at each other, and later Yu Shuheng said, "Shihe, go and cook, I'll go and have a look."
"good."
The supper was already ready, and the two girls were waiting. It was dark! The food was cold! After about 10 days, heavy snow fell outside again!
Zhou Shihe went to the kitchen to serve the vegetables.
Yu Shuheng came to the desk as soon as possible. The pen and ink bottle on the desktop were messy, and the manuscripts were even more chaotic.
There is the first original draft and the second draft after refining.
The original manuscript is written and painted, and the entire paper is covered with blank space. It looks like a ghostly talisman at a thick glance.
Only by picking up and reading it carefully can you understand the connotation and essence of it.
She looked at the first manuscript for a long time, then put it down, picked up the second manuscript and sat on a chair and started reading it.
It’s not okay if you don’t read it. Her feet have already taken root, and the first sentence in the first chapter attracted her.
Why is the male protagonist proud of marrying 7 wives in his life?
Yu Shuheng looked down and unknowingly fell into the world of works, forgot the time and the purpose of this trip.
I couldn't extricate myself for a moment.
After coming out of the bathroom, Li Heng wiped his hands dry, rushed into the kitchen with a whistle, and said to Zhou Shihe when he met:
Shihe, I'm so hungry!"
In the past, I used to call Comrade Shihe, but now I am so hungry that I don’t want to talk much, so I have saved the word “comrade”.
Zhou Shi was not prepared for this. The first dish she heated was Wensi tofu soup, and she had already served a bowl of rice on the stove. Wen Wenwanwan said:
"If you haven't eaten for a day, drink some soup and tofu to make your stomach first, and don't eat hard foods directly."
"Yeah, OK."
At this time, Li Heng didn't know what to be polite at all. He reached out to grab the rice bowl and saved even the chopsticks. He just came to the side of the bowl and started drinking.
Seeing this, Zhou Shihe pulled a pair of chopsticks from the bamboo basket and handed them to him, "Drink slowly, it will be good for the stomach."
"Yeah...\n" Li Heng's mouth kept moving away from the bowl and responded vaguely.
He kept drinking, gulp, until the bottom of the bowl was full of tofu, and he was willing to take the time to take the chopsticks and pick up the tofu.
After eating, Li Heng licked his mouth and expressed his gratitude without any meaning: "Thank you, this soup tastes so good, it is the best soup I have ever drunk in this life."
Zhou Shihe smiled knowingly, and the scallion-white fingers pointed to the Sixi meatballs. "You eat this, it's all minced meat, easy to digest. You can chew it a few more times, and there are two more dishes to heat up, so start the meal immediately."
"Yeah, okay."
Seeing the meat, it still looked so good. Li Heng put a chopstick to hold one in a bowl, and started eating it with a big mouthful. He ate it very much.
While eating, he praised him sincerely, "Your skills are better than mine. Whoever marrys you in the future is the blessing accumulated by the 18th generation of ancestors."
Zhou Shihe smiled cleverly, but did not respond. The pure black and white stared at the glutinous rice chicken that was heating in the pot without moving.
Li Heng, who had eaten two meatballs in one breath, had a little hunger, finally stopped singing, and then began to help serve the dishes and serve the rice and chopsticks.
"Hey, where is Teacher Yu?" Li Heng asked after getting everything done.
Zhou Shihe said: "In our room."
After the words finished, she paused and glanced at him from the corner of her eyes.
Seeing that he had no reaction, his eyes were straight at the glutinous rice chicken, Zhou Shihe couldn't help laughing, unbuttoned her apron, and walked to the second lieutenant.
"Teacher, it's time to eat." She shouted quietly at the door.
"good."
Yu Shuheng responded verbally, but his head was not raised, so he stopped moving. He was concentrating on watching it, so he didn't want to move? The response just now was an instinctive reaction.
Zhou Shihe was a little surprised. Looking back at Li Heng, who had secretly eaten a piece of glutinous rice chicken, he thought to himself if his new book is so good? In a moment, Teacher Yu entered the world of selflessness.
After waiting for a while, she finally didn't enter the room, but returned to the dining table, sat down dignifiedly, and then looked at him.
Li Heng blinked, "Oh, Comrade Shihe, don't look at me like this, I'm panicked, I didn't steal food."
Zhou Shihe's smile flashed through her eyes, but she didn't expose it. Instead, she asked curiously: "What subject is your new book?"
Li Heng replied: "Realist subject matter."
Seeing that she was still looking at herself and interested in her, he added: "According to my conception, it mainly tells the grievances of the ancestors and grandchildren of the two major families, showing the historical changes that lasted more than half a century from the late Qing Dynasty to the 1970s and 1980s."
He roughly explained the main ideas, and Zhou Shihe stared into his eyes, feeling a little dazed for a moment.
After a while, Li Heng reached out and said, "Am I very talented?"
Zhou Shihe's long eyelashes passively followed his hands and smiled without saying a word.
"Oh, Teacher Yu is not coming out yet. I am so talented and will be starved to death." Li Heng looked at the lying position for the second time.
Zhou Shihe stood up, "Then I'll go and shout again."
"Don't, forget it, it's only more than 10,000 words. I'll finish reading it in a few strokes. Wait a little longer." Li Heng reached out and grabbed her arm.
The two of them lived comfortably and looked at the place where their hands were junction.
Two seconds later, Li Heng pretended to let go of her wrist naturally and said, "Sit down, it should be very fast."
"Okay." Zhou Shihe sat down as he said.
Later, the two of them waited quietly, but they didn't say anything.
Three minutes later, Li Heng couldn't help but put a piece of glutinous rice chicken in a bowl, "I feel that this piece of meat is not very good, why don't I eat it first."
Zhou Shihe didn't respond.
Li Heng said, "You say a word, otherwise I'll be embarrassed to eat alone."
Zhou Shihe turned his head and didn't look at him, a faint smile appeared on the corner of his mouth.
After waiting for a while, Li Heng said shamelessly: "Then I will treat you as your default, I will start eating."
Zhou Shihe still didn't speak, but there were faint sounds in his ears.
Half a minute later, Li Heng smacked his lips, "I've finished eating, you can turn around."
Zhou Shihe looked at him and found that there was an extra glutinous rice chicken in his bowl.
Li Heng said: "Don't thank me, I just ate two pieces in one breath."
Zhou Shihe laughed. It was the first time he saw such a person in so many years that he could have such a happy meal.
Two minutes later, there was some movement in the second bedroom, and then Teacher Yu walked out.
As soon as he sat down, Yu Shuheng said, "It's good. Compared to the first two books, I like yours more. I feel that this book is more fascinating. At the beginning, I have the urge to chase you and read it."
Li Heng said thank you.
Yu Shuheng picked up the chopsticks, greeted the two of them for dinner, and then asked, "How many words are planned to be written in this book?"
Zhou Shihe looked over and heard Teacher Yu praise her so much, she thought she would go and read it after finishing her meal.
Facing the eyes of the two women, Li Heng carefully said: "Let's base it with 500,000 words, it depends on the writing situation in detail.
Yu Shuheng was a little surprised: "So long?"
"Well, a long article. I will have a good rest after writing this book. At the same time, I hope it can bring me one or two honors back."
Now the three of them are inseparable, and their relationship is extremely familiar. Li Heng doesn't have so much to avoid talking.
For the first time, Yu Shuheng and Zhou Shihe couldn't help but look at each other, and their expectation for his novel was even stronger.
This dinner almost became his talk show, and he was talking.
The two women listened carefully, and asked a few words from time to time. It was not until the remaining rice was completely cold.
Yu Shuheng looked at his eyes with a faint light, and it took him a long time to speak up: "Shihe, I know you have been hooked up by the novel. Wash your hands and go to the room. I'll wash the dishes."
Then he said to Li Heng: "It's past 8 o'clock, you go and take a shower. After Shihe finishes watching, the three of us will go for a walk at the entrance of the alley."
"good."
Li Heng and Zhou Shihe stood up one after another and did their own things.
Yu Shuheng's eyes kept moving with his back. At this moment, she had not yet fully emerged from the world in the book, and finally realized the mood of her best friend Runwen.
There are really talented people in this world!
Teacher Yu thought so.
More than 10,000 words looked very fast, and they passed it carefully in less than 15 minutes. But after reading it, Zhou Shihe felt a sense of loss because she had no choice but to read it. She sat on the sofa for a long time, and then slowly read it from beginning to end.
After reading the second time, Zhou Shihe put the manuscript back to its original position and helped clean up the messy desk.
She now understands a little, understanding why Suisui can't control herself anymore.
After regularizing the room and cleaning the floor, Zhou Shihe walked out and saw Li Heng doing push-ups.
Yu Shuheng was on the sofa next to him, holding a cup of coffee in his hand, drinking gracefully.
When she saw Zhou Shihe, she asked, "Shihe, do you want to have a cup?"
Zhou Shihe shook her head slightly, "No, I can't sleep at night."
”...57,58,59,60."
The standard standard was 60. Li Heng let out a long sigh and stood up and asked, "Do you want to go out for a walk?"
"Let's go." Yu Shuheng finished drinking the remaining coffee, took an umbrella, and took the lead in leaving the yard.
The snow outside was still falling, falling layer by layer on the ground, densely packed.
Zhou Shihe also took an umbrella and asked him if he wanted it?
Li Heng waved his hand to refuse, "I like heavy snow days. Although I often freeze me half to death, I just have a special liking for it."
These words made a person appear in Yu Shuheng's mind, and also made Zhou Shihe think of someone in his heart.
Walking out along the alley, the three of them quickly arrived at the entrance of the alley. At this time, the road was full of traffic, which was even more lively than expected.
Yu Shuheng sighed, "It's New Year's Eve the day after tomorrow. Many stores have closed down, and many stores have more business than before."
Li Heng asked: "Does the teacher miss home?"
Yu Shuheng shook his head, "I don't think too much. I spent so many years at home and had a fresh feeling of spending the New Year away for the first time."
She asked Zhou Shihe, "Shihe, where are you?"
Zhou Shihe pondered for a while and said, "I'm fine, I just miss my grandma a little, she's in poor health."
Li Heng felt a little guilty and said, "I'll take you back after the New Year's Eve dinner on the first day of the day."
Yu Shuheng shook his head: "The teacher didn't buy air tickets for the first grade of junior high school. They were all from the second grade of junior high school in the morning, and I gave them Shihe.
Li Heng, you are so busy writing and there are so many things at home. Go back and deal with it first, and then come out early to write with peace of mind. Zhou Shihe also agrees with this: "My teacher and I will go along the way, Li Heng will fly directly to Changsha. Let's see you for the first time."
Seeing the two women with serious expressions, thinking that they really had a lot of things to do, Li Heng hesitated and finally agreed.
After walking for half an hour, Li Heng was covered with thick snow. In the end, Zhou Shihe gave him the umbrella, and she and Teacher Yu held an umbrella together.
It was already past 9 o'clock when I got home, which was relatively late.
Li Heng shook the snow on his body and asked Yu Shuheng: "Teacher, I plan to go to Teacher Wang's house in the first month of the year.
Do you have anything to help me with?”
Yu Shuheng said expressionlessly: "No, I don't plan to see her on such a festive day in the New Year, so don't mention her to me."
"ah?"
Li Heng was a little confused. Teacher Yu, who had just said that he had a conversation, how could he change his face if he changed his face?
Wouldn't you have a fight with Teacher Wang again?
After having a cup of hot tea, Li Heng chatted with the two girls for a while, and then got into the room again. Today, he felt good and wanted to strike while the iron was hot and then write the second chapter.
As for how many words can be written in Chapter 2? He has no limits, and he has no burden in his heart to write as much as he can.
After 11 o'clock in the evening, Zhou Shihe, who had finished washing, walked in quietly.
It’s really easy to close the door, even if you close the door inch, you just need not make any sound.
Realizing her caution, Li Heng smiled and said, "It's not that precious. You should do whatever you should do, just as usual."
Zhou Shihe followed him and laughed silently, then walked towards the head of the bed under his gaze. But halfway through, she stopped again.
After hesitating for a moment, she turned around and came to his desk and asked warmly: "Which wheat will usually do something for you during your writing?"
Li Heng said: "I will help me refill the tea occasionally."
Zhou Shihe asked: "It's gone?"
Li Heng said: "It's gone."
Zhou Shihe was a little surprised: "Didn't you follow your work?"
Following the work? He thought of his high school English teacher at the first time. When Mai Xu said, he said, "Sometimes, Mai Xu will keep a sense of distance from me."
As smart as Zhou Shihe, he understands it almost instantly.
Before Mai Xu's thoughts were exposed in the past, she did not guard him in the study for some psychological reasons.
After his thoughts were exposed, Mai Sui usually waited outside the living room due to psychological pressure and guilt, and would not enter the study easily unless he shouted.
In short, it's just a sentence: Mai Xu put a layer of lock on her, but she won't get too close to him.
Because as time goes by, as she grows older, she gradually understands something from the eyes of the opposite sex around her: hot! longing! charm!
Mai Sui knew his own situation and had an extraordinary temptation for men. There were several times when they got together for a long time, and Li Heng couldn't help but stretch out his hand to hug her waist and abdomen, but he controlled it well.
If she stayed in a confined space with him for too long, she would be afraid of having an impact on Li Heng and affecting his writing.
It affects his thinking, and he is afraid that his emotions will be greater than rationality at one moment.
The conservative-minded Mai Eagle did not distrust him, but she could not convince herself.
Regarding him and wheat ears, Zhou Shihe's personality naturally won't say much, but just said gentlely: "
If you want me to help, you can call me."
"Okay, thank you." Li Heng thanked.
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