Chapter 1154 Measuring the root bone(1/2)
"I know this too, but Mr. Zhou has been in the Imperial Heaven Supervision, so it is not convenient for me to find him."
Yuan Xing gave Yuan Xiaoyi an idea:
"Mr. Zhou Qun will follow the ancestor along the way.
Brother Xiaoyi is also from the Yuan clan, so you might as well ask the ancestor to test the root bones.
You can also discuss the work with Mr. Zhou Qun.”
"Good idea, why didn't I expect it?"
Yuan Xiaoyi showed joy on his face, and then said with some concern:
"But what if I am a talented and a genius in the world of Taoism, I am selected by the ancestor?
If you practice Taoism every day, don’t you even have time to write books?
How can I become a master of storytelling at that time?”
Yuan Xing looked dark when he heard this.
Is this kind of pursuit for me, my clan brother?
Isn’t it much better to practice Taoism and achieve immortality than to be a storyteller?
Although Yuan Xiaoyi was nervous, he still shook his head and walked towards Yuan Tiangang's car.
After all, after writing a piece but not getting the master's advice, Yuan Xiaoyi was almost mad.
Yuan Tiangang, who is fairy-like, continued to sit on the cushion to test the qualifications of the Yuan family's children.
As the leader of the Imperial Heaven Supervision Bureau, Zhou Qun stood behind Yuan Tiangang with a solemn expression.
Yuan Xiaoyi held the book and shook his eyes at Zhou Qun. Zhou Qun was also attracted by him, so he bent down and said to Yuan Tiangang:
"I have an old friend who wants to join the master's disciple. I'll go and receive him..."
"Yeah, go.
Since he is Zhongzhi's friend, I will give priority to measuring his bones in a while.
If you have good talent, you will be admitted to the Imperial Heavenly Prison.”
"Thank you, Master!"
Zhou Qun stood up and came to Yuan Xiaoyi. Yuan Xiaoyi handed over his work like a fan meeting an idol and said:
"Brother Zhongzhi, this is a new book I have written recently!"
Zhou Qun took the book, but before he could open it, he just pinched the thickness of the book and exclaimed:
"Last time I met Xiaoyi, you told me that you planned to start writing a book.
It took less than a month to update so many times.
With such diligence in the renewal, you will definitely have a place among the top storytellers in Dachu in the future!”
Yuan Xiaoyi's old face turned red and she smiled at Zhou Qun:
"Brother Zhou has won the award, so let's take a look at the content first."
As an old storyteller, Zhou Qun reads books very quickly and just chooses the main plot to watch.
In less than a quarter of an hour, Zhou Qun finished reading the book written by Yuan Xiaoyi.
Yuan Xiaoyi asked with anticipation:
"Brother Zhou, how about it?"
Zhou Qun pondered:
"The writing style is pretty good, and the main plot is also very good.
But there are still some problems with the book, and it’s okay to talk about it in ordinary counties.
The audience in Luoyang has a high taste. If you want to get this book to Luoyang, it may not be popular."
Yuan Xiaoyi humbly asked:
"If you have any questions, Brother Zhou can tell me just by saying it."
Zhou Qun opened the book and pointed to the first chapter and said to Yuan Xiaoyi:
"There is no burst at the beginning, and the speed of entering the plot is too slow.
It is best to unfold the emotional line between Fan Juan and Zhao Zilong by conflicts."
Zhou Qun turned back a few more pages and continued:
"As a villain, it is normal for Zhao Zilong to be unable to defeat him when he was young.
However, you didn't handle it well at the end, so you have to let Zhao Yun and Wen Chou say a few harsh words.
For example, 'Thirty years in Hedong, thirty years in Hexi, don't bully the young man and the poor' is very good.
Zhao Yun said this, wouldn’t the audience’s sense of expectation be raised?”
Yuan Xiaoyi was enlightened when he heard this and said happily:
"Brother Zhou is right, I have to remember this sentence!"
The two were discussing the excitement, and Yuan Tiangang spoke:
"Zhongzhi, you can let your friends come."
Zhou Qun quickly responded:
"Disciple obeys the order!"
He lowered his voice and said to Yuan Xiaoyi:
"Let's go, be more respectful later."
Yuan Xiaoyi nodded and stepped forward to pay a great respect to Yuan Tiangang and said:
"Yuan Yi pays homage to the ancestor."
"Zhongzhi's friend is still a child of my Yuan family, which is not bad.
Come on."
Yuan Xiaoyi took two steps forward and asked Yuan Tiangang to put his hand on his forehead.
"The root and bone are good, you can join my Imperial Heaven Prison."
If other Yuan children received such comments from the ancestor, they would be ecstatic.
Yuan Xiaoyi's face turned bitter and said in a stern voice:
"Thank you, my ancestor..."
After Yuan Xiaoyi retreated, Zhou Qun asked:
"Xiao Yi passed the Master's test, why are you so depressed?"
Yuan Xiaoyi said depressedly:
“I was quite idle and had nothing else to do except write books.
But this time I entered the Imperial Heaven Prison, I was afraid I had to concentrate on practicing Taoism and obey the ancestor's instructions to carry out the mission.
In this way, how can we become a famous storyteller in Dachu?"
"There's nothing to worry about."
Zhou Qun smiled at Yuan Xiaoyi and said:
"Practicing this thing is not something that can be achieved overnight.
Take me for example. I only practice for two hours a day, and the rest of the time can be freely controlled.
Our Imperial Heaven Supervision is not that busy, and we have time to write and write stories.
Since we have become brothers, wherever I go to talk about books in the future, I will naturally take you with me.
In less than a year, I promise you to become a famous storyteller in Dachu.”
After hearing Zhou Qun's promise, Yuan Xiaoyi turned his worries into joy and said excitedly:
"So that's it, then I'll follow Brother Zhongzhi in the future."
After becoming a member of the Imperial Heavenly Prison, Yuan Xiaoyi naturally stayed in Yuan Tiangang's car and sat next to Zhou Qun.
Zhong Hui looked at Yuan Tiangang's car in disbelief and said to Yuan Xing:
"Brother Xing, I didn't expect that your brother would pass the assessment!"
Yuan Xing was also surprised by this result and nodded:
"It seems that the assessment is only related to talent and has little to do with mind and nature."
While the two were talking, a beautiful girl in green walked onto Yuan Tiangang's car with a cute little boy, which attracted everyone's attention.
Yuan Tiangang tested many juniors of the Yuan family, most of whom were over ten years old.
To be continued...