Chapter 334 The script is not written like this
"First of all, I want to ask which two of these five scripts wrote?" Su Shichen took out five of the eight copies. The writing style and plot arrangement of these five copies were significantly higher than the other three copies, and the pen tip was obviously two people.
"Three of them were written by Xiaohan, and two were written by the president." The girl named Xiao Mo replied.
"President Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan must have written novellas or short stories." Su Shichen asked again.
"Well, I have been serializing novellas in newspapers since high school, and Xiao Jiang has published two books since high school, and the sales are pretty good." When Han Yege said this, Jiang Xiaohan felt a little embarrassed. The sales of his two books in front of others were indeed good, but it was not a little bit cold in front of Su Shichen.
Su Shichen nodded slightly. Tsinghua University is worthy of being one of the most famous institutions in China, with many talents emerging. Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan can be called talents without any compromise.
But this further proves that Su Shichen's comments are unreliable. Forget it, let's go to the others. How can Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan write something that they tried their best to even write scripts? This makes people feel a little disbelieving.
"Who wrote this?" Su Shichen picked up another script again and asked, "Who wrote this script?"
"I..." with a timid voice, the girl named Xiaoma said, "That... Although I saw my mother write drama scripts before, I wrote it myself for the first time, so it may...it seems that I didn't write it very well."
"Although I'm not writing well, at least I'm reading this script, written much better than these five." Su Shichen once again gave an unexpected evaluation.
"Su...Shichen, this joke is not funny at all." The mouse thought Su Shichen was joking with her.
Su Shichen shrugged, "I'm not kidding at all. From a basic perspective of drama, the script you wrote is indeed much better than these five scripts."
"No, no...whether?" The mouse waved his hands repeatedly.
Well, from the beginning, Su Shichen said that all these drama scripts were not called scripts, and then to the random evaluations now. Why are they said random evaluations? Even the mouse of the script author himself did not think that he was better than Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan, but Su Shichen said this. If it weren't for Su Shichen's reputation and amazing achievements, someone might have directly refuted it. Of course, although no one spoke now, the resentment on his face could still be seen at a glance, especially Jiang Xiaohan's mouth was moved and he was ready to say something.
Su Shichen ignored this situation and continued: "You can see that you can see from these scripts. Both of them have good writing skills and the way to write stories. This familiar pen tip is of course better from the perspective of novels, but we are not talking about novels now." The first half of the poem is still a compliment between Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan, but the words are paused. "What I want to say is that there is a considerable difference between novels and scripts."
"Stop talking about novels, even the difference between movie scripts and opera scripts is very big. How can we summarize this difference..." Su Shichen touched his chin, "Simply put, the scripts are just emotional."
As the saying goes, "It's not amazing that I never stop until I die." Su Shichen seems to be like this. His words are more amazing than the other. This summary sentence will start to shock the seniors in the activity room as soon as they are released. What does scripts mean that there is no emotion? How can those who are engaged in creation have no emotion? This is what only laymen can say.
"Simply put, novels can express the emotions the author wants to express through words, while movies and TV series can also be expressed through monologues, but stage plays cannot. Does the actor perform on the stage suddenly sound of the inner monologue suddenly come? Therefore, the expression of emotions in the drama is only through physical movements or language. So all the above in the script is useless." Su Shichen sat on the table, holding a pen on the table and crossed out all the emotions described in the side of the script.
Although Su Shichen's action was unexpected, he did not encounter any objection. He paused and continued: "The other is the character that appears. It may be necessary to talk about the minor characters in the movie first, because it is completely necessary to highlight the characteristics of the main characters. But a novel has a passage to express, and a movie can be the same as a shot. But on the stage play, can you imagine that there are twenty or thirty characters on the stage at one time?"
Let’s not talk about the size of the stage, even if you don’t consider the size, the audience of twenty or thirty characters at one time will not die indiscriminately?
"There is another point. The relationship between characters is too complicated and cannot be expressed in the stage play at all. Therefore, these dispensable characters can also be deleted." Another large paragraph was crossed out.
"By the way, another thing is that the drama script is the same as the movie script. The actors must know clearly what actions, expressions, or lines to say at the time are the foundation of the script. Therefore, these descriptions are very beautiful words and sentences in the novel, but there is no doubt that they are useless in the script." Su Shichen's stroke of the pen was too much, and almost crossed out one-third of the content of the five scripts written by Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan.
After Su Shichen marked it like this, almost half of the five drama scripts written by Han Yege and Jiang Xiaohan were crossed out.
Then put the script that had been "dirty" with the script written by the mouse and asked, "Which script do you think is better now?"
Now all the people in the activity room had nothing to say, because the facts were in front of him, what else could they say? Jiang Xiaohan wanted to open his mouth and closed his mouth, and the entire activity room fell silent.
"So I wrote so well?" Xiao Moe muttered cutely.
"Didn't the mouse script be based on the format? Not all of it work." Some people may have denied the scripts they had worked hard to write at one time by Su Shichen. Some people were a little dissatisfied, so they muttered this sentence in a low voice, but it seemed particularly obvious in the quiet activity room.
"The mouse script may be because I have read the drama script before, and there is no problem with expression and format. However, the dialogue is too straightforward. There is a very interesting rule for drama. The stage play is performance rather than reading aloud. In other words, the action performed by the actors cannot be too few. The combination of movement and language is a perfect stage play."
"But if you perform according to the script written by the mouse, you can almost only use language to promote the development of the plot. This gives the audience the intuitive impression that it is connecting the script rather than performing the script." Su Shichen's words are very organized, and most importantly, if you think about it carefully, it seems that it is really what Su Shichen said.
Han Yege sighed, obviously agreeing with Su Shichen's statement. His face was not good, so it was natural. Many people in their cultural club worked hard for so long and were completely unqualified in the end. The novels and drama scripts were indeed very large.
Jiang Xiaohan had nothing to say, and took his three manuscripts and looked at the paragraphs that Su Shichen had stroked with a pen. His face turned pale and didn't know what he was thinking.
Not only was Su Shichen not an outsider, he also used incisive comments to tell them that this was the real expert.
The atmosphere in the activity room changed from being hot and hot to the silent and depressing atmosphere now. Su Shichen secretly touched a cold sweat and thought to himself: "Did you say too much? You don't blame me, you shouldn't blame me. This is what they insisted on me. No, now is not the time to think about this. It seems that the most important thing now makes them restore their confidence."
"Cough cough." Clear your throat first, "Dear seniors, this is the first time I write it, I have no experience..." As he said that, Su Shichen suddenly remembered something. This activity is once a year for campus opera, and the script is always read that the Cultural Society is responsible. Then Han Yege is a senior, so it is impossible to make such a mistake. Perhaps something happened to the Cultural Society?
My thoughts went off the wrong way, and I said righteously: "This time writing drama scripts is the business of the entire cultural club. I have joined the cultural club just now, so I should also help." Su Shichen said.
Su Shichen's words shocked everyone and they began to be happy. Su Shichen's comments just now were so sharp that they should be very familiar with the drama script. It would be a good idea to have Su Shichen's help.
"When will I hand in this script?" Su Shichen estimated, "I have been in a hurry recently. If I'm in a hurry, there's nothing I can do."
"Campus drama will be held on the 20th of next month. It's just two months left. Because the performance troupe has to rehearse the script with the script, it's still about one month left to hand over the script to them."
"Okay, I'll try my best. We're about to start class. I'll leave first, seniors, seniors." Su Shichen looked at the time on his phone. The time for this class was about to come, and he was about to leave the activity room.
"We have to work hard too. Before, it was because we had no experience, and now we have experience, and we cannot put all hope in the script on Shi Chen. We have to work hard ourselves. Mouse, please tell us the format in detail later. The revolution has not been successful, and comrades must continue to work hard." The cultural society began its first effort together.
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At this time, Su Shichen had already arrived in the classroom and was waiting for class. During this gap, he thought about it: "Drama script, comedy, tragedy, historical drama, "Midsummer Night's Dream", "Hamlet", "Henry IV", "Isn't it just a campus opera? Wouldn't it be too exaggerated?"
Just thinking about it, there is no further information because the class has started.
After Su Shichen returned to school, his life entered a very peaceful stage. When he had classes, he walked around the school garden during class. As for the absence of classes, he naturally stayed in the room to write fairy tales. All he had to do was to complete this fairy tale collection in the shortest time.
So this level of seriousness can be said to be a long and sleepy way. With such efforts, in two weeks, Su Shichen finally wrote the fairy tale "Everything Will Be Good".
Even if he just selected the story in his mind and wrote it down, Su Shichen still took half a month. The reason was that Su Shichen not only copied it, but also revised it. The stories selected in these three books will become more Chinese.
He sent the manuscript to Wang Ni's email address and then called him.
"Auntie, the manuscript of the collection of fairy tales has been sent to you."
"Yeah, I saw it."
The email was sent but the interval between him calling was less than a minute. Su Shichen asked, "Auntie, you won't keep staring at the email address." Otherwise, there would be no such coincidence.
"It's not just a coincidence. The name "Everything Will Be Well" is so strange. Does it have any special meaning?" Such a name looks like the name of a healing series of novels or songs, but it doesn't look like the name of a collection of fairy tales at all.
"It's a little meaning. By the way, Auntie, you said before that the publicity is ready. So when can you publish a book?" Su Shichen asked, "Can you be tomorrow?"
"It's very urgent? Even if you shorten the publicity time, printing and layout will take time, at least the day after tomorrow." It was very rushed to print and promote it for a day, and then to publish a book, but fortunately Wang Ni's preparations were very perfect.?
"Send the manuscript to type."
The attachment is downloaded to the USB flash drive and the secretary takes it to type.
At the same time, Wang Ni called the planning department of the publicity department: "In accordance with the original publicity plan, coordinate with the publishing department to carry out publicity."
Shanshi Company made efforts, and Su Shichen's collection of fairy tales "Everything Will Be Well" set sail...
Ps: Many readers ask if the kitten can update the time more stably. In fact, if the kitten is not surprised, it will update twice a day. However, because I have now developed the habit of sleeping during the day and exercising at night because of writing novels (this is not good, because the kitten originally had stomach problems, and sleeping during the day makes the kitten unable to eat on time for a long time, and the stomach problems are getting worse and worse.) I started writing at night, so the chapters are published in the early morning.
You don’t have to stay up late and wait for updates, because you can see two chapters of updates when you wake up the next day, which is quite stable.
The kitten has become a night cat. In this case, I don’t throw away monthly tickets or rewards, so why are you waiting for?
Chapter completed!